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Shiny! But... I think if you're going to have the word "army" in the title, then you should truly have an army of storks flying with bombs. I can totally hear "Ride of the Valkyries" playing then.
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I agree with the placement. Maybe the shirt could have some words or clouds, but the shirt does need something else and the placement is really awkward
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I really like this; the concept and execution are great. the one nit picky thing I would say is make the style of the torpedo more like that of the crane.
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This looks so much cooler on the aged notebook pages! With the shirt, it really is missing something.
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