I'm hoping this one doesn't get declined.

im sorry, but its too plain to pass.
i enjoy the idea though, keep working on it,

maybe make a scene with a piano and a ball room?

a few of the iterations look like erect male genitals.

"Im sorry, but..." wtf do people even say that for. Like theyre actually sorry? No :P *SLAP!* Cut it out!

I think its a really nice idea but not really for a tshirt.
(Erect male genitals? omg. Josh, have you seen one before?!)

I was actually thinking of Llamas, but I guess sometimes my funtime happyhour playforever zone does look like a llama sometimes.

I think this is interesting, and I'd really like it if the figures developed with more detail. I also think this looks a little plain, especially with the bottom placement, and I'd like to see some background or other elements or something added to expand the design and fill more of the shirt.

^^^ ditto to Sunshine's comments.

ditto ditto

i would like it more if the first dancers started right on the edge maybe a bit cut off so there was more space for more piano keys

i thinkjosh has a very strange and discolored piece of male genetalia then