Woah...love the perspective and this on the brown tee. The colored portions really pop off the color and make my eyes do pleasurable things.

hmm. absolutely love the concept but the execution doesn't work for me at all. the coloured areas are so bold they completely draw attention away from the illustration. i also don't like how the linework changes between white and black, it just makes it harder to see.

gooood....

In retrospect the inverse thing would prolly only work on a black shirt. I'm not gonna take this one down but for brown shirt just imagine the line-work is all black cus that's prolly how it'll print assuming it makes it that far. I think a lot of the fuzzyness there now, though, is just image compression on the placement examples and it won't be hard to tell what's going on irl. For the curious, the linework in standard b&w.

take out the blue spot

I agree with Prexis. I also think the the big areas of color are a little too big and overpowering. The blue spotlight that's on the cat... where is the light source? Is it the computer screen? it's a little hard to tell.

I think the best thing about this design is your illustration, and I think that should be the focus. Maybe if you had the light from the open door falling on the cat? maybe the shadow of the knife closer to him. Maybe you don't need that oval-shaped spotlight.

I think your illustration is great and this is really funny.

i heart the moment the cat says of course

I agree with Chelly.

ditto

i don't get it?

$5

Print it on brown and I'll buy the hell out of it $5

This is intriguing...beautiful mind/zodiac cat looking for a criminal mastermind?

The Maltese Kitten also, and other bad detective puns.

Way too busy. It's a pain to look at. 2/5

I like the version you linked to much better, this made me squint. 5 for the other version.

I do too, in hindsight.

I like the idea but I think its a little messy and unclear.

I like the other linked version better.

this is funny...but not for a shirt

Good design, poor execution

Good Idea*

Nah you're wrong. Thanks though.

this is beautifully designed and manages to establish a story. However i just think that there is too much going on!! Soooowwy

sad face

what a shit score