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humour after all

by vintz
humour after all

About the design

Submitted by vintz on February 21, 2008

ginetteginette

i don't get why there's a weird bird at the top.. ?

professorE

That's what makes it funny...

j_ohan

love it... but perhaps skip the bird

songincarnate

funny, but ditch the bird

loveisasongx

i really dont' like the bird at the top...i'd like it much better if it was gone.

liberatesputnik

Ditch the bird, and the caption. "Human after all" doesn't add anything (and in my opinion, if text isn't adding to a shirt, it's detracting from it).

But I love the concept!

flammenstrahl

I think the designer's idea was that he is only covering himself because something (the bird) is looking at him. So if that's the case, I get why the bird is there. But even then, I think it would be much better without the bird, simply because anybody else is looking at the shirt.

ginetteginette

that's an interesting take on the bird flammenstrahl, but if that is indeed the case than i'd suggest to the designer that the bird should be looking downwards at the man.

yojimbo06

lol on the design

FoxyPhoenix

Ditch the bird and caption, otherwise it's great!
The subtlety (without the obvious caption) would make the idea more powerful, I think.

irishann

no bird, no caption, will buy

lyssie

no weird fis bird and no text

koager

the bird is a raven or crow
mainly shows up in anime
whenever a character does something stupid a crow flies across saying "aho..aho...aho"
and aho means stupid or idiot

ralphi

no bird no text.

JoeyRun

excellent work love this, but i have to agree with the majority, ditch the bird.

iribe

umm... did anyone notice there are three sets of arms but only two sets of arms?

That bugged me more than the bird...

squirrel67

Love this with or without bird and text. It looks like Billy Connoly.

amoynoodle

completely agree with everyone.... no bird or caption, and i would definately buy. fantastic idea though.

Tob1as

no text,no bird and everything is good.

sythec

^
Agreed. The text just make's it blargh

chul

Three sets of arms but two legs? Thats not right...

Atwistedmind

Sans bird and text please.

redetoile

no bird, no text.

inkpen

Same.
Sin bird, sin text.

thatchick

yeah having 3 pairs of arms and 2 of legs is weird, but on the other hand, it would look weird any other way too. I mean with 3 sets each, where would the 3rd set of legs go? And with 2 sets each, the arms would look weird overall because we're used to two arms sticking out on either side. It would make more sense, but it would still look odd... (Conjecture.)

And yeah, the bird is random and unnecessary.

_Docile_

drop the bird, and its a 5, otherwise a 3

Captain Tetanus

indeed, get rid of the bird, it doesn't go with the picture.

Carmelb

isn't "human after all" a daft punk album?

squakz

No Bird, No text- then i'd buy it!

vintz
vintz profile pic Artist

yeah!

vintz
vintz profile pic Artist

yeah!

vintz
vintz profile pic Artist

i send a new version with your advice..:)(sorry for the bug)

alejandromila

jeje, good joke! The bird is from Dr. Slump, isn't it? Here in Barcelona we saw this series when I was child.

jpeacockdesign

i think the bird would work better if it was in the same da vinci style

greenapl

^ I agree. Otherwise the bird seems out of place and random. If it such that the man is embarrassed in front of the bird, the bird should be changed.

I think the design would benefit without the bird at all. It would make people laugh, but the bird seems to distract from the overall meaning.

Bryclops

Beat that dead horse: ditch the text and bird, and I'd totally buy this.

xKatt

No bird, no caption! Very clever, I'll give it a 5!

aReYouDaft

i agree with xKatt

Neko Pastry

Brilliant! You get a gold star!

CookA200

awesome! drop the bird and the text = $5

Thornelius

Really good without the bird; the text is pretty solid though

Chelsey587

i agree the image is strong enough without the bird or text, 5 though :-)

debrasbizzare

i like it except for the bird..
i dont really get the bird

PlaidSide

love the daft punk reference. $5!!

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