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humour after all

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ginetteginette
   ginetteginette on Feb 26 '08
i don't get why there's a weird bird at the top.. ?
professorE
professorE on Feb 26 '08
That's what makes it funny...
j_ohan
j_ohan on Feb 26 '08
love it... but perhaps skip the bird
songincarnate
songincarnate on Feb 26 '08
funny, but ditch the bird
loveisasongx
loveisasongx on Feb 26 '08
i really dont' like the bird at the top...i'd like it much better if it was gone.
liberatesputnik
liberatesputnik on Feb 26 '08
Ditch the bird, and the caption. "Human after all" doesn't add anything (and in my opinion, if text isn't adding to a shirt, it's detracting from it).



But I love the concept!
flammenstrahl
flammenstrahl on Feb 26 '08
I think the designer's idea was that he is only covering himself because something (the bird) is looking at him. So if that's the case, I get why the bird is there. But even then, I think it would be much better without the bird, simply because anybody else is looking at the shirt.
ginetteginette
   ginetteginette on Feb 26 '08
that's an interesting take on the bird flammenstrahl, but if that is indeed the case than i'd suggest to the designer that the bird should be looking downwards at the man.
yojimbo06
yojimbo06 on Feb 26 '08
lol on the design
FoxyPhoenix
FoxyPhoenix on Feb 26 '08
Ditch the bird and caption, otherwise it's great!

The subtlety (without the obvious caption) would make the idea more powerful, I think.
irishann
irishann on Feb 26 '08
no bird, no caption, will buy
HesitantCheese
HesitantCheese on Feb 26 '08
what irishann said
lyssie
lyssie on Feb 26 '08
no weird fis bird and no text
koager
koager on Feb 26 '08
the bird is a raven or crow

mainly shows up in anime

whenever a character does something stupid a crow flies across saying "aho..aho...aho"

and aho means stupid or idiot
ralphi
ralphi on Feb 26 '08
no bird no text.
JoeyRun
JoeyRun on Feb 27 '08
excellent work love this, but i have to agree with the majority, ditch the bird.
iribe
iribe on Feb 27 '08
umm... did anyone notice there are three sets of arms but only two sets of arms?



That bugged me more than the bird...
squirrel67
squirrel67 on Feb 27 '08
Love this with or without bird and text. It looks like Billy Connoly.
amoynoodle
amoynoodle on Feb 27 '08
completely agree with everyone.... no bird or caption, and i would definately buy. fantastic idea though.

Tob1as
Tob1as on Feb 27 '08
no text,no bird and everything is good.
sythec
sythec on Feb 27 '08
^

Agreed. The text just make's it blargh
chul
chul on Feb 27 '08
Three sets of arms but two legs? Thats not right...
Atwistedmind
Atwistedmind on Feb 27 '08
Sans bird and text please.
redetoile
redetoile on Feb 27 '08
no bird, no text.
inkpen
inkpen on Feb 27 '08
Same.

Sin bird, sin text.
thatchick
thatchick on Feb 28 '08
yeah having 3 pairs of arms and 2 of legs is weird, but on the other hand, it would look weird any other way too. I mean with 3 sets each, where would the 3rd set of legs go? And with 2 sets each, the arms would look weird overall because we're used to two arms sticking out on either side. It would make more sense, but it would still look odd... (Conjecture.)



And yeah, the bird is random and unnecessary.
_Docile_
_Docile_ on Feb 28 '08
drop the bird, and its a 5, otherwise a 3
Captain Tetanus
Captain Tetanus on Feb 28 '08
indeed, get rid of the bird, it doesn't go with the picture.
soupedup29
soupedup29 on Feb 28 '08
i agree with most. no bird, no text. then you're golden!



http://www.threadless.com/submission/153004/dashboard_drummer_diagram/
Carmelb
Carmelb on Feb 28 '08
isn't "human after all" a daft punk album?
squakz
squakz on Feb 28 '08
No Bird, No text- then i'd buy it!
vintz
   vintz on Feb 29 '08
yeah!
vintz
   vintz on Feb 29 '08
yeah!
vintz
   vintz on Feb 29 '08
i send a new version with your advice..:)(sorry for the bug)
alejandromila
alejandromila on Feb 29 '08
jeje, good joke! The bird is from Dr. Slump, isn't it? Here in Barcelona we saw this series when I was child.
jpeacockdesign
jpeacockdesign on Feb 29 '08
i think the bird would work better if it was in the same da vinci style
2 days later
greenapl
greenapl on Mar 02 '08
^ I agree. Otherwise the bird seems out of place and random. If it such that the man is embarrassed in front of the bird, the bird should be changed.



I think the design would benefit without the bird at all. It would make people laugh, but the bird seems to distract from the overall meaning.
Bryclops
Bryclops on Mar 02 '08
Beat that dead horse: ditch the text and bird, and I'd totally buy this.
xKatt
xKatt on Mar 02 '08
No bird, no caption! Very clever, I'll give it a 5!
aReYouDaft
aReYouDaft on Mar 02 '08
i agree with xKatt
Neko Pastry
Neko Pastry on Mar 03 '08
Brilliant! You get a gold star!
CookA200
CookA200 on Mar 03 '08
awesome! drop the bird and the text = $5
Thornelius
Thornelius on Mar 03 '08
Really good without the bird; the text is pretty solid though



Chelsey587
Chelsey587 on Mar 03 '08
i agree the image is strong enough without the bird or text, 5 though :-)
debrasbizzare
debrasbizzare on Mar 04 '08
i like it except for the bird..

i dont really get the bird
PlaidSide
PlaidSide on Mar 04 '08
love the daft punk reference. $5!!
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