come on! don't touch my worms

i think these characters are way cute, but compositionally this is not as strong as it could be. just some weird things, like the arm loop being directly above the worm, and the arms in general being not as wild as they could be (if they were spaghetti arms all over the place with twists and loops - more than just one - it would be neato)

also i find question marks in designs really weak. we can tell by that worm's expression that he's questioning something, we don't need a question mark to get it, let alone three question marks.

actually i worked more on the composition, it started with a big simple form from the neck, and finished with little details, i mean the worms, i think it's more dynamic than a simple design in the middle of the tees... i think it's really more interactive with the person who wear it.

i just don't get it at all.

same, jcoddington.
what is this?

nono i mean i like that it's coming from the neck, i just meant specifically the arm loop/arms in general seemed a bit off in my eyes.