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The boat is rendered well...unfrotunately, it's styling is clashing with the cartoonish nature of the sea dragon & speech bubble. The layout on the shirt also looks awkward. 3
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the kerning on the text is awful, and you probably don't even need the speech bubble at all. The illustration is fantastic.
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(Contrary to popular belief, there is currently no School System of the Deep. Unfortunately, this means sea monsters are given no opportunity to learn arithmetic or proper grammar.)
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Abbylg, are you nuts? It's a sea monster! It doesn't even speak English, much less know how to use proper grammar!
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Yeah I agree with everyone. I utterly love this but the type really lets you down. Text isn't the problem, its the font. $4
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sentiments are there without the distracting speech bubble...and this illustration is awesome, save for the speech bubble...in other words; lose the speech bubble
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i think its adorable :] and i like the text, but you could just do text without the bubble that might look better since no one seems to like the text
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I adore this illustration and the thought behind it!! Coincidentally, yesterday I watched a special on the History Channel about new evidence found regarding Titanic.
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I don't like the text balloon or the inconsistency in the color of his scales... but I like the overall design
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Not only does this depict BFF's, but it is also dedicated to my own Best Friend who is altogether too obsessed with the Titanic.