Make Love No Bomb
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1558 days ago
Submitted on:
Feb 20 '08
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Average score:
1.59 from 541 votes
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"Make Love, NOT Bombs"... not "no".
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the style is great, the wording not so much. it could be reworked.
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The stork delivering a bomb is all you need for this design. I'd recommend removing all the text, and just centering the image on the chest.
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^i agree.. the text takes away from the great part of the design. just the stork and you got a 5$ from me.
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NO TEXT! it would be awesome without or put the text on the back and small.
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fatheed on Feb 20 '08 This is like an awkward mix of 'Make Love, Not War' and 'Drop Beats, Not Bombs'. And it doesn't work. The illustration is good though.
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No text!
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I agree, I think it would work better if you took away the text and left just the stork and bomb.
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I agree, the text is redundant. Image good.
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text is throwing the balance off
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ditto Sunshine69
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eheh maybe you all are right! next week I'll try something just with the stork!^^
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the no throws it off a little, the idea isnt bad. i dont like shirts with so much text, so i dont know if i would wear this, but its not bad.
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please make it" not bombs", if you're going to have text. maybe the text can go on the back (please)....
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Maybe it's "Make Love TO Bomb"
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What is it with Threadless users hating text on shirt? That's all I see in comments..."no text, no text"....even if the shirt needs it! This one probably could go without it, but good grief with the text-phobia.
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mezo on Feb 21 '08 Text is acceptable when it is done well. The text here is standard, nothing special. Like the image and concept.
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Completely get rid of that text, it's just pushing the best part of the design down. Keep the bird, lose the text! 5$
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