I'm really enjoying the flow of your design, but the positioning on the shirt makes it seem a bit awkward, a little too centered, i think. Also, the "freckles" on the chin, right arm, and breast just don't feel like it's the same style as the rest. All in all, a fantastic tee, $4
oh, and the white strikes me as silver foil, not sure why, but i think it would look pretty decent like that.. just a thought.
About my design
This was originally on purple but some some constructive criticism and placed this on black.