I'd lose the drop shadow on the text. Drop shadows RARELY work. This would look hot with a non-bubbly, clean sans serif face like franklin gothic or akzidenz, or an old-looking scripty font... or maybe handwriting. Try it all in 1 color, maybe just the one used on the pipe. THEN I'd buy.
i submitted a new one of this idea, its not up yet, but i submitted it before i read steelballs' comment.. and somehow i did exaclty what he said.. the font is a lot plainer than this and i learned Flash so the pipe is solid and vectory
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