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Feb 11 '08
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Robsoul on Feb 11 '08 Lose the type, maybe make the pencil a little smaller. Nicely done.
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i agree with Robsoul
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i agree with Robsoul and ratm23
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In silver metallic ink would be trendy too... and yeah, no text ^_^
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ginetteginette on Feb 11 '08 "designer's head x-ray" or "head x-ray: Mr. Graff Designer" or something would have been a lot better/cleverer er..
and the pencil is ridiculously oversized. if you wanted this to look like a real x-ray you should have stuck with a normal sized pencil, and collage it at an interesting angle. horizontal is boring. have it angled so as to presume that the designer inserted it through the ear maybe. also get rid of the outline around a pencil. pencils wouldn't glow like that by x-ray. it's a neat idea but it needs more work. |
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will be great on the resubmit.
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I like ginette's ideas: smaller pencil and angled. I like your concept though.
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loved the concept man, you loose the text (itīs hard to make a really clevar pun in english right?)
hehe. qhen you resubmit iīll gave another 5$ |
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5$
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nice concept!
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$5 and print
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i looks like someone got stabbed with a super sized pencil.
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no text 5$$$$$
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great concept -- looking forward to a resubmission with changes based on previous comments
maybe have a pencil, marker, and paintbrush all in there |
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Wow the designer stabbed himself??? with an over sized crayon coin bank?!? Whoa he must have been really irritated.
Nice idea, but I agree with all of the above - Lose the text, smal...... (Except Helo's - How would you get a paintbrush stuck in your head? [No seriously how? is that even possible?]) |
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Cool concept.
I'd get rid of the text & possibly change up the pencil a bit. |
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no text, smaller pencil and it's cool
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I am going to repeat everyone else: no text.
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