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This is a brilliant idea, but I don't really care for the layout on the shirt! Needs just a bit of tweaking to be a solid 5! Still, muchos points for the idea.
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don't have to lose the nose side, but maybe some sort of seperation...or those lines that takes something small and magnifies it. awesome idea tho
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The left side has a different style then the right. I think your idea is great. I personally prefer the style on the right. Well drawn germs.
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The left side is brilliant! But unless you described what the right side was, I'd have no idea. It doesn't seem necessary, either. I'd say keep just the left side, and then possibly center it.
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I agree on the layout issues. I like the idea and the way it was rendered. Rework this a bit, and you'll be in good shape.
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I LOLed at the body set up like a stadium. Then I notied the nose right next to it and I grimaced.
And I didn't even realize the germs were going -into- the body, it looks more like a sneeze. |
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i like showing the germs with tickets, but the nose gate is a bit much. the styles don't go well together - it seems off.
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How 'bout starting a sentence with a capital there, Webster...
(hey, if we're gonna get nit-picky...) |
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i dont like the nose, i like the germ crowd and the ones with the tickets as well as the seating set up, but the nose looks odd in the design
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