my second attempt at this idea, i think this one is way better...but i guess you guys will be the judge of that.

Cool idea. Can you post close up of the "pocket"

for a close up on the pocket:

http://flickr.com/photos/14426196@N05/2248841773/sizes/l/

I like the front. You might wanna simplify the joke a little, the police car is a little much. Maybe a small badge stating the "Pocket Protectors" title. I dunno, it's your design. I laughed out loud though, I'm not lying! It really is hilarious and a shirt I would buy.

This is pretty funny. I do think the back design is too much/unnecessary, maybe say "pocket protectors" in a badge design or something on the back or under the pocket on the front.

that needs to be a real pocket on the shirt to take it up a level

fun and clever design -- no need for the printed pens if it's a real pocket

Love the design. Police car IS a little over the top. How about making it much smaller, like one of those "designer" logos?

I think you missed the point of the critiques from the first version of this one.

well my intentions were to print on a real pocket, everyone kept commenting about my pocket and how "un-real" it is, but i kept telling them i wanted to print on a real pocket from the start, and many of the other comments were so far fetch that chances are the person saying the comment would only like the change anyways, meaning that i'm trying to please many people not just one...so i dont think i missed anything...i'm just on the site having fun doing my own thing trying to make people laugh...thank you all for leaving well thought out critiques, though, i appreciate and take them all in consideration, i truly do

that may have come out snotty, but i didnt mean it that way...thanks again guys

love the idea

Nice! I would place the car lower on the back. This is a problem for alot of girls, long hair covers up back detail so I usally don't buy shirts with stuff on the back. But put it a little lower and the problem is sloved ^__^