Dodgy kiddy type is as revolutionary as I get....

Did you mean, "You snooze, you lose?"

Other than that, it's great.

yeah it says loose.. =(

yeah, take out the brown bear O, and keep the tooth fairy O

oh, and from a distance it is hard to see the martini glass Y. It is too lightly colored compared to all the rest of the letters.

very well done

cute. (:

good job tapping into stories that reflect the concept
(tortoise & hare, grasshopper & ant)

cute! well done.

Very nice! I love your illustration style. The details of each letter are so cute.

Oh, and I love the clever way you incorporated the "Z"

janell's suggestions are exactly right. Do those and this would be really nice. Very clever use of the Zs. I like this a lot more than most designs of this style.

This is a fun shirt. Kudos on transforming the characters cleverly as a type.

Thanks for all your comments.
I realised my mistake after I subbed it & asked for it to be replaced with one with the right spelling, which is pending....sorry.

This is the right one....

I suck at everything this week :(

http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa227/welshalex/smaller.gif

Nice work..I like it. Though I'd be tempted to go for the tooth fairy 'o' rather than the bear.

This is an amazing typography adventure on a shirt! Yeah, take out the brown bear or the tooth fairy and you've got a heartily enthusiastic 4$ from me.

I really love this $5

This is about Threadless design no. 4 I've seen this evening with typos... spellcheck or steer clear of English!

Damn, they still put the typo version up! Good luck.

VOTERS CHECK THE PROPER VERSION!

^^^^ Revised version gets a $5 from me....nice work :D

More interesting with the mis-spelling, actually.

Yeah squatterjohn, I'm not sure what happened :( but thank you so much for the clicky link :)
Thanks everyone else for taking the time to comment.

I'm on the "fix the martini 'y'" boat. Then you'll have a $5. Nice work.

Manta, I get your point, but it might be more appropriate for a blog post.

this is great, sure will score high for the right version! great work

I love it. I do snooze a fair bit!

LOOL

keep the brown bear, it balances with the other browns well, just the two oranges next to each other would throw it off i think.

Yes very cute indeed. But I think you should fix up the martini glass. Nice work though!

nice spelling. dick.

Totally charming, love the style. 5$

Spelling error or not (Which you've addressed beautifully) it's a cool concept and really nicely executed. I would have preferred the tooth fairy o to have been retained but either way it's a nice design. $5

DreadPirateNate, you are nothing short of a dick yourself. Not only did you fail to correctly capitalise your sentences, you also failed to notice that the artist has already provided you with an explanation and an amended version. If that was perhaps too far for you to scroll down, or if you felt reading all that text was likely to hurt your small brain, the first two comments on the sub already pointed out the mistake in a polite manner, both clearly visible beneath the artist's own comments. Therefore you had no reason to point it out at all and certainly not in that fashion.

In short, you fail.

Quality work, 5$.

Thank you very much for taking the time to comment.

I moved the tooth fairy to the top (replacing the moon) in the correct version.

Squatterjohn, you are like the fairy godmother of this sub:)

This score is crimminal, you were robbed!

hey great work! i like all of them. cool placement design. if you get a chance check out my humble web album site: art.creativesmiths.com