i think it's a really sweet idea. i love the simple shapes and how they make this larger image that's really lovely.
a couple things though from what i see. the curvy lines on the arrows kind of bother me just because the rest of the design is so straight and clean so it seems like the arrows become the focal point rather than guide you through the rest of the design. and i don't know what I think about the placement of the shirt I guess I'd need to see it on someone.
About my design
I have tried to create basic revolution with basic drawing shapes. I hope you will enjoy it!