Funnydoodle, your critique is so fricken lame. This is art, you can't critique it by saying it's "too busy". That just sounds like some rehashed remark. It is themed and extremely well done. I don't judge by whether I'd wear it, I judge by color, theme, ability... this is clearly a five for the effort alone.
Oh, and I think that FunnyDoodle's critique was legit, not "fricken lame". That's actually kind of rude to insult someone like that and then lecture them on why their opinion is "fricken lame".
Also, I think that the term "busy" can be used to describe art. For example, whenever I scored the sub "This is what we call life drawing" I said that it was really busy. But it was a good design and it ended up getting printed anyway.
About my design
in a way... it all could be just a coincidence...
For bigger view click :
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2257/2229536723_8421a32e36_o.jpg
thanks.