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sorry about that link. Slightly larger view: http://www.flickr.com/photos/jacohaasbroek/2225812613/sizes/l/
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what is your point, nulo? I actually wish there were some nice bright colors on this. Nice illo & def a 5ver.
Cape Town huh? I prefer Durban. |
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this makes me think of jebbie saying 'chu' instead of you.
it's nice, but I kind of want something more... Maybe background elements showing how far apart they are, instead of just the text? |
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i was confused at first because i thought the close-up of the faces were bowling balls. that's just me though. really cute design.
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like I said in the critiques section, I'd prefer it without the city names, they take away the level of abstraction. Just "here" and "there" would be better .. if at all. Other than that, I like it.
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i love this but i agree with oneitis about the city names and i agree with reamontime to get rid of face closeups
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the face close-ups are only to show the expressions (for submission purposes). they are not part of the design - check the placement. thank you for the comments so far!
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Oh, I'm sorry. One last thing: For some reason I changed the title round when I submitted it. The title is actually Mr Left Mrs Right.
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That is a better title.
I love the shirt! But I do agree with oneitis, 'here' and 'there' would fit perfectly with the innocence of the design $$$$ $_ $$$ ___$ $$$ |
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I like the concept but the cities' names are unnecessary. I can see a lot of people asking where Cape Town is since it's not widely known like other international cities and people are stupid.
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