Wow, what is up with people. Many of your shirts are great. Like TOGETHER WE FALL APART. That was great. And people gave it a lame score and give you feedback like "maybe center placement". Maybe people just like boring center-placed illustrations. Incredible. I don't think this is your best work but it is interesting. Very textural. I would suggest not having it exactly in the center. Keep up the good work.
It is a distinctive box shape which will more times than not go against you. I'm pretty sure that if this design had a less symmetrical shape and was not so obversity confined to just the top half of the shirt it would score much better. Also it seem to me that this sort of design need not be so small compared to the size of the shirt
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