lonely heart
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Jan 29 '08
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1.68 from 1,623 votes
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I really like this, but think it's better without the ribbon and text.
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yes, i agree, get rid of the ribbon and text and i'll will rock this shirt. or perhaps put the ribbon on the back, across the shoulders and below the collar.
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No text. And I think the motiv is too large (placement). Otherwise I'd buy it.
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I agree with the text, take it out or put it on the back.
Also: too much foilage if you want red AND silver AND gold foil. I'd like to see the skeleton as it is with the warm grey vs. cool grey in regular ink, then a red foil heart. Design-wise, i like the shape and balance of it... upon "closer" inspection, the figure only had one arm/leg but... what can you do? The wings seem too small to actually let it fly, also, but I'm not an expert in the aerodynamics department. |
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ok pll thanks for all the comments so the ribbon goes or palce in the back as for one leg one arm i mean that in the design,haha bout wing size i think its ok it gives it a certain feeling,
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machha so u dont get it u mean u want the skelaton in normal ink like grey or sth?
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yeah, why does it have one leg and one arm? you said you meant to do that? why? plus the skeleton is disproportioned..the spine looks jacked up too
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its meant to be like dat its not an anatomy lesson here :)
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I love it! The Skeli and the Heart are PERFECT as is. Its not supposed to be realistic and 2 arms and 2 legs would completely ruin the effect! Definitely keep the text but put it on the back as suggested below the neck. I'm not sure about the foiling. I'd have to see it irl since I can't visualize what it would look like foiled.
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thanks yatri now we are talking ure right u got me now ;)
wellll bout foils i hope its hot i did this on flash i wanted to post it a swf for flash so pll can zoooom and see the texture cause wat u see now is a foil like texture i used but too bad the flash was tooo big to post but am hoping the best that it will look diff and cool mirror like cause not many foils designs i seen so i wanted to push it to limits also wait for the revolution promo too did some even more foil work and more complex hope u all like it thanks for the tips!! |
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I love this just the way it is, although I think I would like it just as well with the ribbon on the back like some have suggested. The foil will totally rock. LOVE IT! 5$
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I love this just the way it is, although I would probably still feel the same with the ribbon on the back... The foil will totally rock! LOVE IT! 5$
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thankssssssssss i hope it make ittt :) and the votes go cool!
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i want this shirt.
its amazing! i dont really care for the ribbon/banner thing though. id still buy it. awesome job! |
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thankssss loaddsss glad u love it this way acualy lol i loved the ribbon! i dont think it ruins the design or the attention yet i can atill think it can be moved to back if thats wat pll love hehe
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I like the concept, but I think it's just a bit visually uninteresting since there's not a whole lot on the shirt. Maybe make the skeleton bigger?
anyway, 3 for you |
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I'd have to agree about the ribbon text, lose it. I hate shirts that need to be explained or have the pictures meaning narrowed into a definitive.
I'd go with one foil or the other and not both. Preferably foiled skellie and regular print for heart. Love the art, but maybe decrease the size a bit. I also like the placement, every Threadless shirt seems to place their artwork too high. /thumbsup |
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Lose the ribbon. Go a bit bigger with the wings. I love the design!
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thnks!! emberwild ,,thanks all ok but i stil go with the foil colors as they are mayeb loose the ribbon or place it at back
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Maybe move to the ribbon to a shoulder placement, if you feel it must be kept. But I like it, $5. |
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thanks LeahSue. u should wait also for my revolution design when its up for scoring hope ull like it!
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It’s not just the missing limbs; it’s the lack of pelvis, ribcage, or shoulder blades that gets me, and the incredibly shortened torso. Sorry mate the printing style is beautiful but it just looks like you don’t understand anatomy or that it’s a flying foetus.
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i studied anatomy for 4 years lol and i doo want it this style thanks for u comment wana see good anatomy buy a book bout anatomy lol!
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yah man sth like a fetus or thansk again for ur cooments which made me smile :)
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This Is Beautiful $5
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thanks hunnn!
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glad u say so the ribbon didnt bother me i duno yet it can be placed at back but i stil duno
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you like that foil dont you?!?! looks great. 5$
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yes foils are good and i didnt find much use of them here so though to make some ideas, check the revolution design too
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