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1580 days ago
Submitted on:
Jan 28 '08
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2.37 from 1,746 votes
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Oooooh I love!!
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Cool, but isn't the stereotype that elephants are afraid of mice? I really like your design though.
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Ryder Revolution on Jan 28 '08 Why is one tusk all floppy?
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I like this a lot. I just want to see it finished out.
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$5 good drawing
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wow, cool. why not with some colour?
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Like the Elephant! Nice drawing.
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i love that cat he's like what the!?
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Great job! I like the expression on elephant face.
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@ citrouille: Thanks! I'm greatful!
@ dragon: I don't think they really are, but they were in Dumbo. @ Ryder: The left tusk is pointing out like the right one. @ Light: Great! Thank you! @ Element: Thank you! @ Da3mon: I tried a couple colors but they lost the details on the elephant. Thank you! @ Hooray: Thanks a bunch! @ Sage: Thanks, Sage! I like your pic! Thank you everybody!!! |
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Thanks, Leeda!
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Fantastic work as always! You rock!
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Great! I like the light blue.
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Like the artwork, but why are the mouse and the elephant friends?
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fabulous!!!!!!!!!!
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That's one angry elephant!! me like me like alot!
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nice
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I think it's sweet, and yeah, I was wondering a bit about the mouse at first too because of the predominate stereotype, however, didn't the mouse pull a thorn out of a lion's paw and that's how those two became friends (if we're going into fables)
Because honestly, I thought the cat was luring the elephant to step on the mouse. . . Your line style is amazing though, I love that elephant and the character in the face. Best of luck! |
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That elephant is awesome.
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quister on Jan 29 '08 Very distinctive style. Minimal but very expressive.
I love the story, not right out of Aesop or Mother Goose, (why does everybody get so literal), but it's evident what's happening. So you've made up your own narrative or mashed up a few classics, cool! I like my shirts creative. $5 |
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cute!!!!!! $5
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@hongkong: Thanks!
@ming: Thank you! @rare: I was always a big fan of Dumbo, and Timothy the mouse was his best friend...couldn't help but use it in my design. @lippy: Thank yah! @Brandis: Thanks a lot! @kats: Thank you! @V1ctorya: Thank you very much! @voorheis: Sweet! Thanks! @quister: Thanks man! @Redd: Rock on! Thanks! Thanks all, I appreciate everyones feedback! |
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beautiful elephant drawing. that thing is sick! nice concept, too.
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$555555555555555555
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thanks, Arvee!
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I like it!
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bump for arvee
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@kaijukhris: Thank you!
@Sage: Thanks, Sage! @indyrinx: Sweet! Thanks! @ Thank you, Redd! |
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BUMP BUMP
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i love the line work, very original, only thing i dont like is the one tusk hangn down, but i still give it a 5!
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looks right to me
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bump
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5!
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This one is my favorite and would buy it in a heartbeat!
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i think its a good concept, but i agree that the tusk looks floppy. also, the mouse doesn't look like it's pointing at the cat... i think it makes sense when you read your storyline, but if i just saw the shirt i wouldn't understand the context.
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AWESOME IDEAAA!!! $5 all the way. you better win!!
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AWESOME IDEAAA!!! $5 all the way. you better win!!
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Ignore thescheels, RV. It's easy to understand and makes perfect sense. $5
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My favorite one! I give it a 5!
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BUMP!
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@Element: Thanks! You rock!
@fade2red: Thank you! @GreatScott: Thanks, man! @kopi: Thanks! @Tanka: Thanks a bunch! @thescheels: Thanks for the feedback! @gunsontheroof: Yeah! Thank you x2! @Merny: Hey thanks! Much appreciated! @MaryJoB: Thank you so much! @Sage: Thanks again! |
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BUMP
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bump
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Bump!
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Bump bump bump
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It looks great! 5 By the way if the elephant was scared of the mouse. Then doesn't that mean he could get the elephant to do what he wanted? lol
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i would definately wear this times a billion.
such a bomb design =] good work |
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Love this! $5! $5!
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$5 i like to buy this one on white
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I'd like it better if it was more obvious that the mouse was pointing at the cat.
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duh. what else would it be pointing at?
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bumpo for bumbo
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Bump!
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$5 right on the mark my friend
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BUMP BUMP BUMP
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Thank you all for the great comments and scores!
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i hope you win, arvee!
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Outstanding, RV! I think you've got a winner!
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Bump!
I want this one really really bad! |
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White medium for me please
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bump
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i seriously can't wait for this to be printed
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2.37!!!
I can't complain. Not bad for my first attempt. Thanks everybody for the votes and comments! I'm gunna keep my fingers crossed that maybe we'll see this in print! |
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Very excellente !! nice job ! I like it !! $5
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I'd be happy with just the elephant. Sometimes just a cool drawing makes a cool shirt. Nice work as always.
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About my design
Max the Cat sure loved to pick on little Pip the Mouse. One of his favorite things to do. Eat. Sleep. Chase Pip.
Little did Max know, that Pip had a ginormous buddy-ol-pal named Bumbo.
Bumbo the Elephant.