Will Not Be Televised
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Jan 28 '08
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I like your username.
In terms of design I think it is well drawn...maybe a little busy and sort of boring composition-wise. But I do get the idea behind it. Good 1st sub! Happy Designing! |
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OH YEAH!
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Thanks restlessthoughts, well I was trying to go for busy, as in post-rioting or some such, but I guess I'll have to impress you more next time!
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It's a good first design but I'm not loving how it just cuts off at the top. Nice perspective, it's something a little different.
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dacat on Jan 28 '08 Definitely a cool drawing, I wonder if it just needs to be BIG on the shirt...still 5
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ysy101 on Jan 28 '08 I really like it! Can't wait to see more. I agree that it looks kind of odd with it evenly cut off at the top, but the rest of it is great.
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actually now that I think of it I think it is more how it is cut off and its position on the shirt than the composition
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love this.
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I'd wear it bro... :-)
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Thanks for all your comments guys, all helpful :D
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You probably could get away with less colors than you used.
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i love the message you're sending
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well done for your first sub!
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i think you should complete the storefront, the whole picture cuts off very strangely.
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FRICKINAWESOME on Jan 31 '08 ha! Love the name and your use of color against all other elements to bring the point of your design home further. I think a smallish banner on the ground saying "the revolution will NOT be televised" would be a quick touch to suggest the idea here but not give it away. nice first sub and nice revolution sub about revolution but not missing the other point about the contest being about new ideas as well!
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I like it its a really neat design but yet again its a squared off design
if the design wasn't sqare and continued up in a more flowing manner it would be great its awesome to begin with but it could use a little work I'm still gunna give you a $5 though its an awesome idea |
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I like the statement, calm it down a bit and I think you're in business; it's just a bit busy for me.
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neat design.
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I heard that song on the radio once.
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I love the statement. the design is a bit ouf of... too small, too many details, not sure.
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Tonteau on Feb 03 '08 It stops a bit too abruptly for my liking.
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Anything that has to do with revolution is pretty awesome, and this design is no exception! Great job, man.
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thanks again everyone for all your kind comments and constructive criticism!
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I LOVE this! I love the aftermath of a riot. I love how busy and messed up it is. finish the top of the building and it will be perfect. I'd buy it if you didn't change it.
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cool concept
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this is a lot of fun!!
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About my design
The revolution will not be brought to you by Xerox
In 4 parts without commercial interruptions.
The revolution will not go better with Coke.
The revolution will not fight the germs that may cause bad breath.
The Revolution will not be televised.
- Gil Scott-Heron (abridged)
Hey guys and gals, this is my first entry to this site or to any such site, so please go easy on me! Hope you like it.