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I like your drawing.
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nice but i hate how it cuts off accross the top.
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i really like the patterns in the tree!! but i agree it cuts off abruptly at the top...4
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opifan64 on Jan 25 '08 It's a really nice drawing. I think compositionally it would work even better if the branches didn't cut-off abruptly at the top, but congrats on a nice first sub.
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really like the tree, wish it wasn't cut off at the top though
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opifan64 on Jan 25 '08 Oops. I didn't refresh the page... sorry to repeat the same point.
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I agree with the masses here. The top looks awkwardly stright
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I love the tree. I just wish I could see more of the branches.
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Yeah, bad crop.
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love it too but agree with everyone else about the top cutoff
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hey_barn on Jan 26 '08 Agree with above comments. Nice linework.
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Wow I REALLLLLLLY like this!
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i wish this didn't stop so abruptly.
i love the design though. |
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Thank you for all your comments....I agree actually with how it cuts off. I drew it like that on the paper, and couldn't quite figure out how to fix it in photoshop.....any suggestions?
Thanks again! :) |
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I actually like how it cuts off at the top. Think outside the box, and the bun.
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whoa, cool tree, and screen name. 9000$
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I really like this design....and I like the way it cuts off. Great Job!
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Lovely illustration =)
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i like the tree, but i agree.... the branches being cut off at the top really takes away from the design
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I would suggest bringing the branches over the shoulders and onto the back so they look like roots. But that's just me.
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Beautiful … but totally continue the branches upward! It would be cool if they went over the shoulders and looked like roots on the other side.
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opifan64 on Jan 26 '08 |
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opifan64 on Jan 26 '08 http://s97.photobucket.com/albums/l240/opifan/?action=view¤t=tree.jpg
^ or pasting that, lol. sorry. |
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agree with reign_mann, it would be good if the branches went over the shoulders.
the tree is beautiful though. |
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cool.
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this is a definate re-sub. Threadless can cover the full area of the shirt. That tree could stretch across the entire shirt with all its gnarly detailed goodness.
resub! |
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I tired to extend the branches:
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a24/kitten9000/reworked.jpg |
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*tried*
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I love this! I'd definitely buy it if I weren't broke.
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amazing drawing!
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sickness 5$
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Nice rendering of the tree. I agree with the comments on the abrupt cut-off. Your reworked image is a start, but needs some tweaking to get rid of the fade-out overlaps. The tree should also thin out its trunk as it goes up, not get wider. I think this would be nice if reworked a bit and resubbed.
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it would be cooler if the branches grew around the neck
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I feel like I've seen it before..common idea and common placement. But the sketching's awesome.
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KDLIG on Jan 27 '08 the drawing is great, however the tree really needs to extend it's branches, but the illo is stiill good,keep it up! =D
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So cool! This NEEDS to be on a hoodie! And in fun colors too please :)
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as you've heard before, look into extending the branches to the shoulder blades.
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AWK-WARD!
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and again...the top is awkward. and again.......over the shoulders not just a straight line across....looks like you put a lot of effort into drawing while on a piece of paper and then decided to just stick on a t-shirt...needs a little follow through. nice style though!
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I love the new rendering with the extended the branches. I'm not a big fan of gray t-shirts, but a beautiful design idea!
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I agree that it shouldnt be so lopped off at the top.
otherwise I love it!. |
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i love it but wish the branches weren't cut off at the top.
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Listen, I know that everyone who's posted has said this, but if you WERE able to extend the branches, I would buy this shirt, and I'm sure most of the people who commented would too!
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please fix branches and I will buy this immediately!!! $5
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Yeah, the placement needs to be tweaked so that it cuts off at the seem in shoulder, or continues onto the back...
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if the top wasn't cut off
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U JUST HAD TO CUT OFF THE TOP didnt you?
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I want this on a hoodie!
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This is beautifully drawn, but it might look better if it continued up to the shoulders? And yes, I know that many other comments have said the same thing!
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very nicely done. $4
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very nicely drawn. the lines are really awesome!
agreed with the rest, move the tree up a little so it at least goes to the top. other than that... amazing! |
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Don't cut the tree off at the top!!
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Ahhhh soo nice...
thank you; awesome shirt. |
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I like this tree, I Love the way it cuts off at the top! It's like my head is God looking down on the tree.
Maybe the tee should be named " My head is God" |
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hell of a job! Great Tree that you actually drew? Better than picture manipulation.
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FRICKINAWESOME on Jan 31 '08 I can't believe no one's mentioned this yet, but...
what up with the cropped treetop, yo? |
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It'd be great if the branches wrapped over the shoulders a little on to the back. I'd buy it...
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I actually like the tree lopped off at the top. It reminds me of some of the weirdos in my hometown that would trim their weeping willows straight across the bottom. $5
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svrtknkrr on Jan 31 '08 love it.
I think that if you should cut it, cut it even more. Not the illustration but let the cut stay in the middle or something. Because now it looks like it suppose to be all the way up. But if you do a hard cut, then it make more sense. sry for the bad english :D |
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Same! I would buy if not cut off.
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igo2cairo on Jan 31 '08 Love the illustration and it's a fantastic 1st sub, but I have to agree with not cutting the top off. I'm giving this a 4 anyway, but 5$ if you re-sub it.
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this is nice
and about the tree being cut off at the top, you could always try blending/ smudging the ends a bit if the straightness looks awkward... but i like it either way :D |
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Try taping a new piece of paper under your original drawing to make room to draw extended branches. Don't use Photoshop. You'll never get the delicately hand drawn look of the original.
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nettajean....that is good advice.
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This is a really nice rendering and great job for your first sub! The comments are all good. I agree with the crop advice. Still scoring it a solid 4.
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nice score
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igo2cairo on Feb 07 '08 You know what? I regret not giving this a 5$, cut off branches or not, because it's just such a beautiful drawing. I'm sure if it prints you can work something out, so I'm going to join SheepMan22 by yelling "PRINT!"
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