Untouchable music in the air
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1586 days ago
Submitted on:
Jan 22 '08
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Average score:
1.48 from 510 votes
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at first glance i thought the cord was going into his ass. i like the design. but im not so sure about him being on his own shirt
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where is that cord going to plug?
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madruga, the plug goes in the invisible guitar :)
look at a stratocaster image on google.. i would like everyone's critique on drawing style, details and such as this can be used for further submissions.. viennagirl i could easily remove him if that is what's holding you back ;) |
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i think the fact that there's an invisible guitar should be emphasised more
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Love the whole thing, but definitely think you need to fix the plug, and emphasize the shadow a bit more. Great Sub!
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i really like how you kept at in the submissions. looks great. especially the hair
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you're not seriously going to have the shirt within a shirt within a shirt thing, are you?
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at first glance i thought the cord was going into his ass.
Hahahaha, me too. |
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^^LOL
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Good work, I say on the red.
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strats' cord go in front of the body, not the bottom side.
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irocko, it is in front of the body - well.. that depends on how you interpret the drawing i guess..
well.. to hell with it. any tips for next time? :) |
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About my design
After many versions in the critique section, I think my submission is as ready as it gets :)
Special thanks to quister for your very usefull comments!
Please comment, as this i my second submission for threadless - and I would sure like to improve my self.
Regarding shirt color I made some examples. It could also be red on blue, red on sand or blue on sand.