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Submitted on:
Jan 16 '08
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19 comments
Final average score:
1.86 out of 5
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natasssa
the back reads: how do I break into your heart
FuzzyFish
FuzzyFish on Jan 16 '08
text doesnt really have to do with the really cool design... 4$
FVG
FVG on Jan 16 '08
well... When reading the title I was thinking: O no another heart design. But instead it's another cliche image: a bird in a tree!

...and o wait, you have it up somewhere else already?? I like the last version better (with the cartoony birds). But please put your design up in crtitiques first, instead of subbing 3 versions here. Thanks!

robinbailey
robinbailey on Jan 16 '08
i like this version better.
espri
espri on Jan 16 '08
Toss the text. The front image is great, though. Trees are good.
shanty
shanty on Jan 16 '08
ilovee ittttt
2 days later
yayurr
yayurr on Jan 19 '08
I think the design calls for the lines to be thinner. It's nice, but could still be improved. I like the colours...

How does the text link to the image?
Cadence31
Cadence31 on Jan 19 '08
I'd buy it without the text.
Bjoseph
Bjoseph on Jan 20 '08
0$
oneitis
oneitis on Jan 20 '08
I really like this!
BirdsandKings
BirdsandKings on Jan 21 '08
hmmm...because trees with birds seem to just scream "broken heart"...

Keep trying. There are better ways to creatively convey such emotions.
teeshirtee
teeshirtee on Jan 21 '08
Lose the text and I'd buy it. Awesome design
et2006
et2006 on Jan 21 '08
I like the front, but not the back. I think it would be better received without the text.
RClaireR
RClaireR on Jan 21 '08
I agree with the "love the image, not the text"ers.
natasssa
natasssa on Jan 21 '08
thanks for all the comments! about the text: at first they were 2 birds and maybe that made more sense (one bird in love with the other one.) then i thought that's better because when you are in love it's kind of a lonely feeling and you are always thinking about the other person while you are doing your normal everyday things. i don't know if that makes any sense.
Ambear
Ambear on Jan 21 '08
i love it. i say keep the text. i dig the lonely feeling- looking for that lost bird. its very me i feel! please print
angelachangg
angelachangg on Jan 22 '08
i don't like the text. lose it
RedxButterfly
RedxButterfly on Jan 22 '08
lose the text.
overprint
overprint on Jan 23 '08
hiow is this connected with big ideas?
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