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this is a really cool design but i think if it was larger and placed in the bottom left, it would make a much more aesthetically pleasing shirt.
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bottom left, definitely... maybe with some more birds that increase a bit in size as they fo from bottom left and fan out towards the right sholder.
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Yup, that was my first thought even before reading the comments. And, you need more definition that her face is melting into birdy-ness!
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Besides the obvious placement issue, the birds don't really convincingly combine with the silhouette to me.
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did you send this through critiques? I feel like its on the verge of being really awesome, but some fine tuning is still needed.
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as a lot of people said, bigger and the bottom left corner... where it is now the hand would wrap up over the shoulder a little and might look strange, so at least, move it down a little
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So I like it, but I think it would be just awesome if the birds were old school fighters...like WWII ones. Then it would be a 5$ for me. Right now I just can't find a meaning behind it.
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