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liberty migration

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dcee
dcee on Jan 15 '08
the placement on the shirt is a little strange.
quelbeastt
quelbeastt on Jan 15 '08
this is a really cool design but i think if it was larger and placed in the bottom left, it would make a much more aesthetically pleasing shirt.
Rubb3rDucky
Rubb3rDucky on Jan 15 '08
bottom left, definitely... maybe with some more birds that increase a bit in size as they fo from bottom left and fan out towards the right sholder.
robinbailey
robinbailey on Jan 15 '08
i agree.

placement would be better at the bottom.
skateamerica3
skateamerica3 on Jan 15 '08
yea agreeed wit above commentz. but sick design
waltponce
waltponce on Jan 15 '08
Yup, that was my first thought even before reading the comments. And, you need more definition that her face is melting into birdy-ness!
Nut Buttt
Nut Buttt on Jan 16 '08
There should be a no silohoutte rule. It is just to easy.
FRICKINAWESOME
   FRICKINAWESOME on Jan 16 '08
Besides the obvious placement issue, the birds don't really convincingly combine with the silhouette to me.
stevie13
stevie13 on Jan 16 '08
Don't listen to them. The shirt is fantastic.
epocalypse
epocalypse on Jan 16 '08
did you send this through critiques? I feel like its on the verge of being really awesome, but some fine tuning is still needed.
ezzoo
ezzoo on Jan 16 '08
Your shirt Rocks, now everyone has a different openion about placement, to the right, left, above, bottom, etc. You can't make everyone happy. I think it's great as is, and as for the silhouette it works here, cause the idea is strong and simple at the same time, adding details to it will take away from the design. 5$
sugarlust
sugarlust on Jan 16 '08
great design. i would move the placement off the shoulder.
bealteyourjuice
bealteyourjuice on Jan 16 '08
i want it bigger and over the whole shirt
classicoke
   classicoke on Jan 16 '08
is it going back to france?
eschliff
eschliff on Jan 17 '08
as a lot of people said, bigger and the bottom left corner... where it is now the hand would wrap up over the shoulder a little and might look strange, so at least, move it down a little
eschliff
eschliff on Jan 17 '08
but.... i love the design, a few minor tweaks and it would be amazing....
brightlikestarsx
brightlikestarsx on Jan 17 '08
i think this is spectacular. awesome
past tense of draw
past tense of draw on Jan 17 '08
i've seen this sort of stuff all over the place, not with the statue of liberty though. I wonder if a different angle to the statue would make the birds more believable. At the moment i feel that they are just stuck on and inverted?? either way i think it looks cool.

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RickieWeeksMVP
RickieWeeksMVP on Jan 19 '08
Like others, I think it should be in the middle ala Para Poppins.



This shirt would be sick
svernick
svernick on Jan 19 '08
bottom... for sure.. very nice though... $5
jsshrn
jsshrn on Jan 20 '08
cloverfield!



noelle yay
noelle yay on Jan 21 '08
flowers in the attic much?
briielzebub
briielzebub on Jan 21 '08
So I like it, but I think it would be just awesome if the birds were old school fighters...like WWII ones. Then it would be a 5$ for me. Right now I just can't find a meaning behind it.
shikchha
shikchha on Jan 22 '08
bottom left placement would better suit the design...
kwwojo
kwwojo on Jan 22 '08
pretty awesome 5
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