The Language of Love
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Jan 11 '08
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te amo!
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ginetteginette on Jan 11 '08 the design isn't very loving, by which i mean, if it weren't for the text i would have never guessed what it was trying to say. The colours chosen just don't seem to reflect what's being said, and neither are the fonts.
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I agree with ginette; the colors look more angry to me.
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^agreed
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I also agree. I think it's a cute concept, but it needs something more than just the words to make it seem like it's talking about love.
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ich libe dich
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i just realized that ich libe dich and te amo are next to each other, and both of those are of sentimental value to me
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Is Greek up there? Nvm. I see it. :] $5
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daisuki. not really.
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Nice.
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good or bad, it does not matter what you have to say... i still love everyone who care to give his/her two cents.
thanks, and i love you! |
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Sorry I don't like this. Too many differnt type faces. It does not even come close to being cohesive. Just looks like a thoughtless hodgepog of stuff. They might as well be saying " Suck it dork" for what this design conveys visually. Sorry to be so brutally honest but I would not buy this if you paid me.
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thanks for being brutal! i still love you...
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i love you too man
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If there's no Japanese on it (aishiteru), then I wouldn't buy it...
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sorry that's due to space constraint... i'll make one for you in japanese all by itself if that will make you happy...
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fourcolourblack on Jan 12 '08 the typography between the speach bubbles is a bit off. over kerned and under kerned at the same time, and the one bad widow on "mina armastan sind!".
i LOOOOOVVVE the idea though. well done still |
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i don't really get what you mean, but thanks anyway!
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I just came across this again and surprisingly I still don't care for it one bit. The silohouttes look like total clip art from Kmart. I am not an artist or a designer I'm just a girl who works at an artsy coffee shop but I am pretty sure this is not good beyond my own personal opinion
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thanks for repeating yourself. and thanks for caring it enough to spend your time bringing me down again. really appreciate that!
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BubuSam on Jan 13 '08 Nice
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lose the word bubbles all together and just have the text. The people are cool.
Also... I would recommend never taking advice from a coffee house girl named "nutt butt" |
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I dont like the tetx. You just typed the words using different fonts, but didnt work on them. Try to make the words more attractive, make them fit better the baloons. The treatment you do on every single pixel of your design make the difference in my opinion. The idea is there though. :-)
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are all of the phrases correct?
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German is correct, italian is not: "Ti amo" it should be... for all the others some language genius has to post
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"Te amo" is not italian... it's latin.
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Te Amo is also Spanish.
I like the idea behind this design....colours and use of type may need some tweaking- that's all.... |
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"mahal kita" is more proper in tagalog. cool concept but i think the execution needs more work - the font choices arent adding up in the composition.
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i think that te amo is portuguese =)
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...."te amo"is indeed Spanish. Trust me here, I'm fluent in it.
Fugly, fugly, fugly text. Handwrite it, and it would look worlds better. Softer colors. Use pinks and reds. And get creative with your silhouettes. Give them some strange feature or something. Only after you complete these three tasks will you earn my 5$. |
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thanks, i think your feedback is worth much more than your 5$!
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se agapo
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i really like the concept, but not the text styles
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I agree with Ginette, but I love the concept! Keep workin' on it! :)
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It needs japanese - aishiteiru
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no problem, i can always find space for one more!
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I like this a lot...I do, I do.
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Sorry, but you have mistake here ;) In "Miluji te", there is sth missing. A tick over "e". "Te" means nothing. You should have found font with czech letters and website with alphabet and use sth like ctrl+c, ctrl+v.
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if s'ayapo is supposed to be greek then there is a mistake as well. you spell it with a gamma instead of a `y'. making it se agapo
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gumbolimbo on Jan 15 '08 The dutch one is gramatically correct, although ppl would more likely say 'Ik hou van jou'
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foreign language lessons 101!
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yeah, i agree there ought to be some more asian ones... wow, so many languages!
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u forgot the slavic countries... russian...
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i wished i could include every country and every language in the world...
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I love the idea!! I would buy it if you made the colors a bit softer. Cool design :D
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no swedish? hmm..
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guess i might have to do one with all the other languages who are not included here!
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good concept...needs work.
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good advice indeed!
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keep your comments coming... good or bad, i love them all!
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Swedish- Jag älskar dig :-)
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:-)
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Its rather nice, but maybe softer colors for the speech bubbles, and it would be nice to have japanese/chinese to balance it out. Also something about the font is a little weird.
But its a nice concept :) |
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thanks!
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It's the Candy Apples stripper from the Rapunzel shirt!
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thanks for noticing... you've got sharp eyes!
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Agree that it isn't cohesive, just thrown 2gether it seems and taking an image from your other design not kewl...
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its not meant to be cohesive. the idea is to show the diversity of different languages.
thanks anyway! |
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I LOVE this, it's a wonderful idea and I love how you can take in the not so great comments and still be positive.
It's a wicked design! |
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Thanks! It's always better to have people comment about it (whether good or bad) than to have no comments at all! We're here to learn and have fun anyway!
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