This is my first time, so be gentile.

since it's your first time i think the gentiles and non-gentiles will be gentle :)

cute! maybe try a different shirt color though. Also, the bottom part of the design looks like a text banner. I want some text there or substitute banner with a different design element?
what does everyone else think?

love the design, but I agree about the text banner. Ribbon is even fine, but the way it looks now is kind of awkward

wow this is nifty. but the banner ruins it, there must be something else to put there or even add on to the neck heh
i like it on purple!! :)