Threadless T-Shirts - How Too...#2

How Too...#2 by Bgospo

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Jan 10 '08

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My second attempt on the Boomerang of death

cityauctor on Jan 10 '08

that's funny as shit. print. $5

Mrjoshyman on Jan 10 '08

oh my.

I like it.

Eleflowr on Jan 11 '08

you cant really tell its a boomerang, but i like the idea

does he have to be throwing a boomerang?

imo jellyfish of death

Bgospo on Jan 11 '08

thanks for the comments so far guys...and eleflowr i guess your right, he doesn't necessarily need to be throwing a boomerang...maybe a sponge....or a jellyfish :-)

cindylou on Jan 11 '08

it looks like 3 people thowing things at someone running away. it's mean.

ishmaeldaro on Jan 11 '08

I'd prefer the whole scene taking place on the front of the tee. On the back you could have some spectators perhaps.

Bgospo on Jan 12 '08

i guess my idea with the whole shirt was that the boomerang is supposed to return to you (by going around the shirt) but the comic relief of it was that on its return it was hitting some guy in the back...

annihill on Jan 13 '08

make the design a little bit bigger & it's a five. :)
the placement looks great.
but.. make it bigger so you can see the details better & so the viewer knows that its a boomerang.
maybe make the boomerang black or put the design on white?
that'd really make it stick out. :]

Bgospo on Jan 13 '08

sounds like some pretty simple modifications, thanks guys...and annihill i agree with you, my original one was bigger and for some reason i made this one smaller, dont know why...

NomadSlim on Jan 13 '08

By the title, I thought it was going to be a guide on how to poop.

Zak_aeon on Jan 14 '08

If its a boomerang wouldnt the joke be better if it flew all the way round the shirt and hit the thrower in the back of the head?

trumpetplaya on Jan 14 '08

I really like the idea of it going around. But I'm not sure of when people look at it if they would get it. Unless they turn around and look then understand. Yes bigger would be nice. I like this good job

trumpetplaya on Jan 14 '08

Maybe just have one thrower on the front, and have him letting it go and then there's a boomerang right behind him going to hit him. You could have boomerangs going all the way around the shirt.

Bgospo on Jan 14 '08

thanks again guys for the comments, sounds like i have some work to do!

MelloManiac44 on Jan 14 '08

funny concept but i think the design could use some style. i also don't like the color choices which means that i would not buy this shirt.

supersweet on Jan 15 '08

i like the idea and i think it would be really cool if you played around with the design, this one doesnt really use the idea to its full potential (:

Weegie-514 on Jan 15 '08

i like the concept, but make the guys bigger

samnarisa1 on Jan 15 '08

i lyke it :]
maybe you should have another one with apes throwing bananas at the dude cause thats what i first thought of when i saw it.
5/5
BOOMERANG OF DEATH!

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jod3 on Jan 17 '08

i'm liking this baby. agree with above, could do with some development but going around the shirt and getting back to the start is FAB!!!!

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