might just be me.. but i think you should have a few more letter before and after.. so you know it's about the alphabet.. at first glance i thought it was spelling "eight" for some reason =/ .. *could just be me though*.. vry cute n funny nonetheless =)
This is a really good idea, but I think "h" and "i" standing so close together and not seeming to react to "f" passing out (like "e" and "g" appear to be) unbalances the design slightly for me. If these were people, everyone would have a reaction in a group that size.
maybe spell out with the letter "ef'd up!", and have the f down on the ground like that to make the idea more cohesive and give people more of a clue as to read the design. nice drawing style tho and fun idea!
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