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 this is my first submission to threadless
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Tonteau on Jan 08 '08 It seems a bit odd that some of the cages appear to be triangular, while others are square. Little bit dark (subject wise), but nice use of different greys.
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those are some huge babies.
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Yeah, inconsistency in shapes of cages & size of babies compared to size of adults need to be addressed before I'd be willing to buy, but a cool design
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^agreed. good concept, but the scale is way off
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great idea, i agree with the suggested changes though
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Huge babies in triangular cages, interesting concept, just fix it up a bit.
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Needs work but promising
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I agree with just about everyone else, and I would totally buy it. I'm adopted, so this is what I imagined as a little kid when my parents talked about them "choosing" me. $5
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they're clearly dwarfs.
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babies ar HUGE!
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i wanted to make them big so they look like they've been injected with hormones like farm animals are, but if that message isn't getting across then i could make them smaller and re-submit it, if you guys think its worth re-submitting...
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nice..
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this is disturbingly good.
i understand what you meant by the whole "huge baby" thing, but i think it would be more effective if they were smaller. i dont think big babies are a good portrayal of your message. it comes across as incorrect scaling. but otherwise, very nice. |
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make those changes and i'll buy a dozen. $5(with recommended changes)
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this is bizarre. not a huge fan of the concept and i think the execution is lacking any detail. not my fav, but its a good effort!
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I don't dislike the huge babies idea...
I would like some perspective changes, and maybe different sizes of babies, not just all big ones. Like some Chihuahua babies, some Irish Wolfhound babies... |
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hot.
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opifan64 on Jan 09 '08 It's a really cool illustration... very eerie (I won't reiterate the points made above). Acrylic-fronted enclosures with some air holes might give it a more sci-fi feeling: you can kind of imagine how it would look from the shirt placement.
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As a work of art I have no problem with it but I think it's a strange subject matter for a shirt. Wouldn't personally wear it.
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I like it, but it makes me cringe a bit. I agree with comments regarding scale.
You should rename it "Brangelina". Ok...maybe not. |
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I think it's worth fixing the babies size and the cells
otherwise, very good concept |
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fun
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creepy ~ in a disturbing way. I wouldn't wear this but I'm interested in seeing what else you'll submit. keep 'em coming. 3
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HA!
love it. |
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Like many peeps allready said; very interesting idea, but it needs some tuning.... will give a 4 for now, but id still say resubmit.
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Ellsswhere on Jan 10 '08 they already have this, its called the adoption agency, except they keep them in cardboard boxes so they stay fresh for the new parents
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A scary view into the not-so-distant future! Awesome. Definitely worth a fix-up and resub.
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just change the triangle thing and i would 100% buy this.
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Brave New World.
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um... creepy, never would wear it... this could easily be adoption you are showing... and I think adoption is a great thing, this makes it look bad. sorry
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It's really very crisp illo, but I wouldn't wear it as a shirt.
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Yeah I think it only needs a teeny bit of tweaking on the cage depths and maybe scale ratio between the adults and babies. Excellent idea though. Very original. Though it does make me feel a bit sad to see babies in cages.
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HAHAHA. Babies are useless.
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omg smaller babies haha
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just want to say thank you all for your feedback. i'm glad i didn't get any really rude people criticizing my design. i'll make the changes to it and see if i can re-submit this again later.
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The Paper Crane on Jan 14 '08 Clever!
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i like the large babies. it makes it funny. and everytime you put the shirt on you can laugh at them ha
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I'd but it like it is. But I agree that the scale is a little off.
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Great idea but needs some fixing to be a buy.
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