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the colors are great, the typograohy somehow fights with one another, but otherwise its very very good....
change the channel, and u might win, good luck! |
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its like you took two slogans and smashed them together. way too much text. narrow your focus, or atleast make your point more concise. the art is really good.
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i agree, get rid of the first statement
"and for the broken-hearted scenes... oh how i wish i could fast forward" works 'alone'. |
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I like this, but I wonder how easy it will be to read at the size you have it laid out on the t-shirt.
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I wouldn't personally by this shirt but I think it's designed REALLY well and you've done a great job!
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