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grejotte
This bird looks weird...
The first bird is cartoon style and the other was drawn like a kid drawing. So the cartoon one's wondering why the other one looks so weird...
SolomonGrundi
SolomonGrundi on Jan 07 '08
i like
aprettiergreen
aprettiergreen on Jan 07 '08
cute. you could take it even further and add a photorealistic one to the left of the cartoon
morozco420
morozco420 on Jan 07 '08
Actually that would be good what aprettiergreen said...If you had three stages...the photorealistic one looking at the cartoon, and the cartoon looking at the sketch....
grejotte
grejotte on Jan 07 '08
Hmm that's a good idea for the photorealistic one. The three stages too sounds good, but maybe we wouldnt be sure now which bird is supposed to be like, the normal one? But I still like the idea.
Thx for the comments!
SoulfumeInc
SoulfumeInc on Jan 07 '08
^ i like the three bird idea.

this is cute tho
pcw
pcw on Jan 07 '08
yes!! it reminds me of the short film thing in monsters inc. "For the birds"
jonathani1
jonathani1 on Jan 07 '08
I'd have two or three of the cartoon birds. It emphasizes which bird is the abnormal one
ginetteginette
   ginetteginette on Jan 07 '08
yeah i like the idea of adding aphotorealistic bird but i don't know how this would look with three elements. threes in designs are sort of weird because they invoke so many messages that you might not want to send, like that typical "see no evil, hear no evil, speak no evil".

i think that the difference between the two birds you already have should be even more exagerated. also having them the same colour when they are both actually cartoonish looking doesn't seperate them enough.
ginetteginette
   ginetteginette on Jan 07 '08
also, question marks in designs are really redundant most of the time. the bird's expression already reads "WTF?" you don't have to write it out for us. that message is cute and good as is. (FACE)
grejotte
grejotte on Jan 07 '08
Thanks for the comments all! I agree with you all. Maybe 2 or 3 cartoon birds, and 1 childish. Maybe I should have put the childish one with no colors? Like all white? What do you think?
squishyfox
squishyfox on Jan 07 '08
ah haha, this is funny, reminds me as for the birds as well
Fadelatoui
Fadelatoui on Jan 07 '08
Oh! It's so funny! 5 $ I love it :)
ehrady
ehrady on Jan 07 '08
i instantly thought that a photorealistic or photo of a bird would be a good idea. however, not 3 or more birds.

i think you should have only one of either the cartoon bird or the child drawn bird, who is looking weird at the second bird, which would be a photo-bird.

PLUS, maybe even have a photorealistic hand with a crayon drawing the first bird, and as suggested, make the expression really obvious.
canon chhoun
canon chhoun on Jan 07 '08
I like it. no need to change it or anything, i give it a 5. good job
buminthepark
buminthepark on Jan 08 '08
i love this
placement on the bottom is best to me.
Cloudgazer
Cloudgazer on Jan 08 '08
high placement, please!
mushrush
mushrush on Jan 08 '08
Would also work with three or so cartoon birds trying to figure out why a child-drawing bird is coming from one side and a photorealistic bird from the other...

I like it as is though. :)
MissYosHi
MissYosHi on Jan 08 '08
Maaaaaaaaaaaaarvelous!
5$
hell0allison
hell0allison on Jan 08 '08
the bird on the left looks like the bird from the fox and the hound!
threadlessmemberXtream
threadlessmemberXtream on Jan 08 '08
I love it! please don't change it at all! 5 and buy (not for me, unless it came in darker colors, but for my cousins for sure).
Please don't make it photographic, then it might lose its effect!
lily_s
lily_s on Jan 09 '08
very cute.
grejotte
grejotte on Jan 09 '08
Thx for the comments all.
I might add one cartoon bird only, or two, but I think two others would be too much and would shrink the image too much...
I thought also maybe I could replace de wire by a branch? Or maybe they should be put on the ground? What do you think?
ekrass
ekrass on Jan 09 '08
there should be a third proper that is a real-looking bird and no question mark
Asthmatic Avenger
Asthmatic Avenger on Jan 09 '08
Cute, I like the Higher placement...
nikoldesign
nikoldesign on Jan 09 '08
pretty cool!
el3ctr0flo
el3ctr0flo on Jan 09 '08
Cool shirt for a girl ! So cute :)
sanjayamalakar
sanjayamalakar on Jan 10 '08
they both look weird
White-Square
White-Square on Jan 10 '08
birds
piptastic
piptastic on Jan 11 '08
I think it's great just how it is - a realistic looking bird would detract from it's charm... I'd wear it - high placement I think :-) Cute design
gohomeroo
gohomeroo on Jan 11 '08
Closer to the bottom looks a little better
Nestahope
Nestahope on Jan 11 '08
ncie one
Mr Rock
Mr Rock on Jan 12 '08
I think jonathani1's suggestion of more cartoon birds would work really well. Great concept. I like it.
Not So Deep Blue
Not So Deep Blue on Jan 12 '08
I like birds.
xXxhamburglarxXx
xXxhamburglarxXx on Jan 13 '08
hahaha super cute
fooliam
fooliam on Jan 14 '08
I really like it, well done.
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