Threadless T-Shirts - The Story Begins Here...

The Story Begins Here...

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i know very little about art
on Jan 07 '08

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i know very little about art on Jan 01 '08

This is for the threadless revolution contest..
Hope you enjoy it!
Comments are most welcome!

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Steven T on Jan 07 '08

nice~~!! good job~!!!

citrouille on Jan 07 '08

This is very, very good!

alvarejo on Jan 07 '08

this is one of the most original ideas I've seen in a long time, congrats!!!!! $5

Maltzmania on Jan 07 '08

cooolio

loganxman on Jan 07 '08

you forgot to color in the 6's opening besides that it's pretty cool 4

ginetteginette on Jan 07 '08

i think the page numbers are very distracting, and i know they're sort of the focal point of how this design can be well interpreted but i would rather see lines of text there than lonely page numbers. i think text/paragraphs would read better as pages then just numbers.

vinnylo on Jan 07 '08

should of called it book of my life or anatomy or somethin else. really like it

morozco420 on Jan 07 '08

So, do you have the flipping pages on the actual corner of the shirt? How would that work? Or is it just for aesthetics for your presentation?

aprettiergreen on Jan 07 '08

i don't really like the cover design, but this is such an awesome idea i'm willing to overlook that.

commandZed on Jan 07 '08

yeh great concept and nicely executed..you could expand on this idea a lot!

moontanner on Jan 07 '08

cool, almost reminds me of silent movies.

farflung on Jan 07 '08

i think some half-tonery might have made those pages jump out a little more. still, very nicely done!

roadkill3d on Jan 07 '08

good job! $5!

igo2cairo on Jan 07 '08

Ha! Very clever idea, well done,

sammmmanthaj on Jan 07 '08

I adore this shirt!

Bio-bot 9000 on Jan 07 '08

Great idea! I would like it better without page numbers, though.

Keter on Jan 08 '08

I like the numbers. A bibliophile's dream. $5!

i know very little about art on Jan 08 '08

Thanks! keep commenting!

totoro_o on Jan 08 '08

Awesome idea...

shiroyi on Jan 08 '08

evilious on Jan 08 '08

Usually you don't number the inside cover as page 1. Neat design.

enterthephil on Jan 08 '08

Very nice. This is a minor quibble, but if this does get printed, the page numbers should be changed: in addition to evilious's point, right-hand pages are generally odd-numbered, not even-numbered.

opifan64 on Jan 08 '08

wonderfully original, and a really clever trompe l'oeil effect. great job!

MCS4096 on Jan 08 '08

Would love it! and wear it only without the pages

i know very little about art on Jan 08 '08

Thanks for the feedback!
morozco420, it was designed for aesthetics so the shirt looks like a book!
..and thanks to loganxman, ginetteginette, vinnylo, farflung, evilious and enterthephil for the constructive comments:)

mboone05 on Jan 09 '08

Such a positive message! I would love to wear this!

dizzilyblue on Jan 10 '08

I agree with enterthephil. Very intriguing concept!

one23mad on Jan 10 '08

I like it a lot. But it the page numbers really bother me only because even page numbers are always on the left and odd ones are on the right :).

magpiex on Jan 10 '08

im picky. i dont like the 1 on the cover page. no book numbers behind the cover. that aside, very awesome concept. i dig it

loveisasongx on Jan 10 '08

Totally cool!

gohomeroo on Jan 10 '08

It's nice, but would it look goofy cutting off?
I think you should make a 'back' cover to this, it might look corny, but I'm sure you could pull it off.

Michael David Rider on Jan 10 '08

me likey.

Duodora on Jan 10 '08

Awesome!! :) Would definitely buy it, with or without changes :)

felinedev on Jan 11 '08

neat!

Imag1nat1on on Jan 11 '08

Woah... That took me a second to comprehend! Love it though. Original!

kennethcrow on Jan 12 '08

FABULOUS idea... but it could use some work. as ginetteginette said, text would be much nicer, and the numbers aren't quite right. the pages themselves need a bit of work but i LOVE it.

Pizazz on Jan 12 '08

Very crafty!

Willish on Jan 12 '08

I think the 5's opening needs to be filled in grey. The font could be made more original, but the design itself is such a unique and fantastic idea.

FRICKINAWESOME on Jan 13 '08

i agree, no need for numbers. I also wish the pages were a different color, and that the story begins here was using foils and all kinds of crazy colors, and this would be an automatic 5$. As is, i still can't give this any less of a 4$ b/c it's such an original and wearable new idea!

Bramish on Jan 13 '08

I'd prefer it with no 'front cover' design. Just a plain shirt, any colour would work, with the pages turning. Numbers look fine. Keep them. Great idea.

michelle142 on Jan 13 '08

love it! Very original $5

i know very little about art on Jan 13 '08

Thank you everyone for the feedback!
Really appreciate all the constructive comments to help me improve the design. You guys are so nice:)

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