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Jan 07 '08
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nice~~!! good job~!!!
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This is very, very good!
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alvarejo on Jan 07 '08 this is one of the most original ideas I've seen in a long time, congrats!!!!! $5
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cooolio
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you forgot to color in the 6's opening besides that it's pretty cool 4
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ginetteginette on Jan 07 '08 i think the page numbers are very distracting, and i know they're sort of the focal point of how this design can be well interpreted but i would rather see lines of text there than lonely page numbers. i think text/paragraphs would read better as pages then just numbers.
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should of called it book of my life or anatomy or somethin else. really like it
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So, do you have the flipping pages on the actual corner of the shirt? How would that work? Or is it just for aesthetics for your presentation?
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i don't really like the cover design, but this is such an awesome idea i'm willing to overlook that.
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yeh great concept and nicely executed..you could expand on this idea a lot!
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cool, almost reminds me of silent movies.
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farflung on Jan 07 '08 i think some half-tonery might have made those pages jump out a little more. still, very nicely done!
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roadkill3d on Jan 07 '08 good job! $5!
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igo2cairo on Jan 07 '08 Ha! Very clever idea, well done,
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I adore this shirt!
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Great idea! I would like it better without page numbers, though.
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I like the numbers. A bibliophile's dream. $5!
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i know very little about art on Jan 08 '08 Thanks! keep commenting!
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Awesome idea...
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$5
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Usually you don't number the inside cover as page 1. Neat design.
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Very nice. This is a minor quibble, but if this does get printed, the page numbers should be changed: in addition to evilious's point, right-hand pages are generally odd-numbered, not even-numbered.
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Would love it! and wear it only without the pages
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i know very little about art on Jan 08 '08 Thanks for the feedback!
morozco420, it was designed for aesthetics so the shirt looks like a book! ..and thanks to loganxman, ginetteginette, vinnylo, farflung, evilious and enterthephil for the constructive comments:) |
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Such a positive message! I would love to wear this!
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I agree with enterthephil. Very intriguing concept!
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I like it a lot. But it the page numbers really bother me only because even page numbers are always on the left and odd ones are on the right :).
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im picky. i dont like the 1 on the cover page. no book numbers behind the cover. that aside, very awesome concept. i dig it
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Totally cool!
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It's nice, but would it look goofy cutting off?
I think you should make a 'back' cover to this, it might look corny, but I'm sure you could pull it off. |
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me likey.
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Awesome!! :) Would definitely buy it, with or without changes :)
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neat!
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Woah... That took me a second to comprehend! Love it though. Original!
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FABULOUS idea... but it could use some work. as ginetteginette said, text would be much nicer, and the numbers aren't quite right. the pages themselves need a bit of work but i LOVE it.
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Very crafty!
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I think the 5's opening needs to be filled in grey. The font could be made more original, but the design itself is such a unique and fantastic idea.
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FRICKINAWESOME on Jan 13 '08 i agree, no need for numbers. I also wish the pages were a different color, and that the story begins here was using foils and all kinds of crazy colors, and this would be an automatic 5$. As is, i still can't give this any less of a 4$ b/c it's such an original and wearable new idea!
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Bramish on Jan 13 '08 I'd prefer it with no 'front cover' design. Just a plain shirt, any colour would work, with the pages turning. Numbers look fine. Keep them. Great idea.
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i know very little about art on Jan 13 '08 Thank you everyone for the feedback!
Really appreciate all the constructive comments to help me improve the design. You guys are so nice:) |
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This is awesome and clever. I'd buy it!
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16 days later
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Why didn't this shirt get made? ;_;
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whoohoo
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