Piano Basics
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1605 days ago
Submitted on:
Jan 03 '08
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2.37 from 2,026 votes
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Hah, you're right. It is quite subtle. I'm not sure I'd have noticed it if wasn't for the title. But it's clever.
I don't know about the clouds though. Nice colours. |
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I love! 5$
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5$ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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The farther back I got, the easier it was to "catch" the cleverness. I love it! $5!
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love it 5$!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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againstbound on Jan 03 '08 thanks a lot =), yeah, i know its subtle, i just didnt wanted it to be too obvious, i wanted it to be simple and aesthetic and carry within a musical meaning that the wearer can choos to share or keep =)
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I'm a pianist, and I think it's clever. But if you hadn't mentioned it was music-related (and the shirt itself won't, of course), I don't think anyone would notice how the color pattern resembles a keyboard octave.
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$5 !!!! this tshirt is cool !
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good to wear this!
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againstbound on Jan 04 '08 thanks a lot, but due to the vagueness (is that word correct) of the concept i´m not sure how well it would go, at least i hope it doesnt get dropped :/
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i think the focus is lost from the birds since they are so low and/or b/c of the clouds
but i really like this idea. $4 |
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againstbound on Jan 04 '08 thanks a lot, mmm averyone preffered the lower placement (me included) might be the clouds, but i thought they kinda lead you down to the birds
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wow! great idea :]
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FRICKINAWESOME on Jan 04 '08 You had me at "i was listening to some stone sour."
Oh wait, that's where you lost me. Also, this doesn't really imitate a piano very well. |
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nice :)
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againstbound on Jan 04 '08 thanks, and frickinawesome, its not supposed to imitate a piano, but to represent an octave of it, look it up =)
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nice work! i'd like to see it on a light blue tee. 5
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I'm a music major. IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII love this.
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I'll buy it!!!!!!!!!! 5$
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its been done before,
and is on several commercials. neat |
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againstbound on Jan 04 '08 really? which commercials? i dont live in the US so...
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It reminds me of that Pixar intro to Monsters Inc.
I Like it a lot though |
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do the clouds mean something? I think I would like it with out them, I really like the birds...
I'm also going with a blue tee... |
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Oh yeah, agreed, no clouds.
What a neat concept. |
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againstbound on Jan 04 '08 damn, everyone in citique liked the clouds, the original design didnt have them, oh and thanks =)
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cute but in my opinion not worth printing. a lot of people do bird subs, it's getting old.
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againstbound on Jan 04 '08 ^yeah but the woot ripoff was hilarious ¬¬
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againstbound on Jan 04 '08 sorry abou that last comment, im usually nicer, i just havents slpet well all week, gotta take a nap now
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love the idea, would love to see it on a light blue shirt too!
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againstbound on Jan 04 '08 thanks, actually in critique i had it in sand and blue options, butthe sand won
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reminds me of cancer bats.
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againstbound on Jan 04 '08 huh? wtf are cancer bats?
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I like your idea... Perhaps bring the line of birds higher up onto the t-shirt and have some type of music-related activity happen underneath... like the cartoon representation of someone playing an instrument (a flute came to mind), but instead of the wavy music, you have the birds above/beside.
Or I'd have the birds singing while sitting on a washline on a sheet or piece of laundry that could suggest the shape of a piano, fluttering in the wind. |
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I wish more people participated in critiques.
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i really like this, and I would buy it because I play piano. It should almost say piano basics somewhere on the shirt, like on the back or something, but even without, hell yeah its awesome. Props.
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againstbound on Jan 05 '08 thanks, but i predict a below 2 score on this, at least it hasnt been dropped =)
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Wonderful concept!
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againstbound on Jan 06 '08 =D
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omg, this is great! =]
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i love it $5 =)
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I love it! The birds were a fantasmic idea.
I don't really get the clouds though... i think the shirt could even possibly work without them. |
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Ohhhhh, I want this t-shirt like *burning*. 5 and a buy.
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againstbound on Jan 07 '08 merci, merci mes amis =)
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This shirt is great man! I wish you good luck!
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im a musician and i love this!!!! 5$!!
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againstbound on Jan 07 '08 =)
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Oh. My. God. I love it times about a million. $5. 'E gads they better print this...
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$5! Birdies.
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ooh, this is sweet. 5$ without the clouds, but i'll still give it a 5.
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I think it'd be better if the birds were across the chest, but this is still brilliant.
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So, apparently it's just me - but i like the clouds! I think it'd be much too plain without them, and i'm really satisfied with the birds being towards the bottom. people just stare at my chest if things get too high, so to find nice, classy shirts like this with a catchy design on the bottom is always a great find. $5 i love it.
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againstbound on Jan 08 '08 yeah, everyone in critique liked the clouds, im hearing complains til now, but still thank you all =)
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$5 =D
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Cool and bacteria infested.
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my skuidispooch feels ok, 5$ ;D
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I'm neutral on the clouds...eh.
I've not seen it done before, and I think it's great. Concept and execution for the win. |
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eh clouds
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againstbound on Jan 10 '08 last day! i'm guessing a 1.92 :/
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I like the clouds too.
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nice idea. the birds are cute, but not sure about the clouds. fix the clouds and you'll get a better score.
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againstbound on Jan 11 '08 holy shit! i expected a below 2 score on this, =)
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NICE SCORE! Great job againstbound. !!!
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i would buy this! :]
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i really like your clouds
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