I like the idea and dare i say "energy" to this one, it just needs a little bit of deciphering to be a really amazing shirt. I love the idea of the inner fire of a lightbulb paddling away after being broken....go with that thought a bit more and maybe lose the branches for a really powerful design.
Hm good concept. The screw-thing was the first thing I noticed. Because of the leaves my first thought was it was a giant beehive hanging from a small tree. Weird no? And then I realized it was a broken bulb, and then I noticed the flame with a paddle. Cool!
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