Gazer
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3130 days ago
Submitted on:
Nov 01 '03
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Average score:
1.61 from 290 votes
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colours work beautifully.
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its a really nice image. feels a little off centre to and thus making it a little uncomfortable to the eye. maybe lean her up against the left side_? but yeah, i love the image. nice work.
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nice linework! agree with tiggus, she needs something to lean against.
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I agree with you guys about the centering issue, I originally had her hard bottom left of the shirt but was pressed for time. It can be fix, thanks for the comments!
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I agree with the previous comments - it looks good, but would possibly look better alligned to the side. I think also if it was low on the shirt that could look cool.
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great image. fantastic line work as well as use of grey scale. very different from your other submission, which shows versatility. great detail in the shirt, jeans and berkinstocks. this is something that i would wear. i would however love to see this in the bottom left corner my right. not a biggie cause the art the most important. great job.
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cintrao on Nov 01 '03 the only thing that's really missing is some pride in the way you display it...
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5 days later
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i don't know.. i guess it's well executed, but when all you have in a piece is a person, the interest always falls on the face. here, you can't see the face, so you end up with a really boring composition. if she was actually looking at something, i think it would be different
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neo mecha she was supposed to be looking at something but i was pressed for contest time. I have finished the final one but if i submit it will be my fourth submission.
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