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Dec 24 '07
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retromodern
Alright here is the submission. I hope you guys like it! Oh, and thanks for all the great critiques from everyone! They sure helped me with the final sub'd design. (:

Now here are the words on the shirt...

Top Swirl: "Oh my love, oh my dear, fly away with me, escape on the stars, dance with the moon and I, take me with you to this place of freedom; of love, and one day I pray that we can be together forever in that wonderful place so just close your eyes and hold my hands."

Wrap Around Swirl: "And you smile at me, so follow the stars to a new land and grow old with me as we watch from above, we'll be in paradise far far away, can't you just imagine it, the sights, the sounds, the voices never heard, the rush of time and space, the past, present and future of our love that they will never understand, just because of a strong connection that we have, like a single standing flower against the first frost of winter's night, and on that night, and on that night may the stars be bright and the moon give us light."
billiard86
billiard86 on Dec 24 '07
Did you write that? Because it is awesome, $5 all the way.
xxalifishxx
xxalifishxx on Dec 24 '07
Good Idea, but I'm not really diggin it. 4 though :]
StrayTangent
StrayTangent on Dec 24 '07
Get rid of the text and just make it whispey lines.
kataroche
kataroche on Dec 24 '07
I think the text makes the shirt... I love it.
Dominika Kaczmarczyk
Dominika Kaczmarczyk on Dec 24 '07
lovely:)))
Keter
Keter on Dec 24 '07
$5 Perfect as it is.
retromodern
retromodern on Dec 24 '07
Thanks, guys! (:
Hollidaze62
Hollidaze62 on Dec 24 '07
Love the text. It gives it a much deeper meaning. $5
your latest cup of tea
your latest cup of tea on Dec 24 '07
amazing! i want this! $5
filsper
filsper on Dec 25 '07
beautiful design, not sure about the text though. I'd buy it anyhow.
teeshirtee
teeshirtee on Dec 25 '07
So prettiful. I'd buy it. $5
WuPockey
WuPockey on Dec 25 '07
i like how the text was put on the shirt, not just a chunk of it, but its made into part of the design. good job!
retromodern
retromodern on Dec 25 '07
Thank you guys for all of your comments! (:
Merzi
Merzi on Dec 25 '07
It's beautiful. Don't get rid of the words. 5$
slothesarecool
slothesarecool on Dec 25 '07
Love the text. Definite 5$
Wennie
Wennie on Dec 26 '07
nice and delicate :]
fribblemctits
fribblemctits on Dec 26 '07
The curves of text look very classy, it's a great design.
retromodern
retromodern on Dec 26 '07
Thanks you Merzi, slothsarecool, Wennie, and fribblemctits! (:
the.gecko.girl
the.gecko.girl on Dec 26 '07
I really love this shirt.
Chelseaoyesums
Chelseaoyesums on Dec 26 '07
beautiful :D absolutely beautiful.
pimpmyrussian
pimpmyrussian on Dec 26 '07
So lovely. :)
Tortuga
Tortuga on Dec 26 '07
I WANT THIS SHIRT!!!

best damn sub i've seen in a looooonnng time. And the words... yes. I love spacey type things, and this one is BEAUTIFUL! if they don't print it, I will cry...well maybe not, but I will be very upset!!
retromodern
retromodern on Dec 26 '07
Aww, thanks. (:
I hope it get's printed too, but who knows.
Bando99
Bando99 on Dec 27 '07
There are some grammatical and spelling errors. If you fix those, then it's a $5 (hint: "Dance with the moon and ME")
autumn_firefly
autumn_firefly on Dec 27 '07
dripping stars = GREAT touch
j.e.l.l.oits alive
j.e.l.l.oits alive on Dec 27 '07
its funny not even 5 minutes ago i just posted a blog that said how i dont like placements just and image in the middle of the shirt and nothing else. i love how you used the whole shirt and it still flows not only that but it is not some stupid image it has meaning i hope this one gets printed and thats saying a lot cuz lately a lot of my scores have been really low i think ive scored like thousands and my average is 1. something but this is for sure 5$
rayhay
rayhay on Dec 28 '07
so nice!!!
kwwojo
kwwojo on Dec 29 '07
5 no doubt loving the text
plans
plans on Dec 29 '07
i would like it better without th eback design...
BrokenTekk
BrokenTekk on Dec 29 '07
like it but would love it on some different colors
retromodern
retromodern on Dec 30 '07
Thanks for the suggestions, guys! (:

I did try some other colors when I was creating the design, and they just didn't fit into the design well. ):
cayanne45
cayanne45 on Dec 31 '07
Great idea. I LOVE the swirling and use of the whole shirt. The text smacks a little cliche though and would probably keep me from buying the shirt. Just a thought...
retromodern
retromodern on Dec 31 '07
Hmm. Okay. Thanks for the comment, anyway! (:
retromodern
retromodern on Dec 31 '07
Oh my gosh, guys. Less than 24 hours left of scoring!
retromodern
retromodern on Dec 31 '07
Hmm. Anyone know what the minimum score that you can have in order to get chosen? LOL. Thanks to all who scored!
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oneitis on Feb 03 '08
omg FIVE. FIVE FIVE FIVE.

you hear me, threadless? FIVE. PRINT.
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