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I will not curse during class time.

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Ohhh those long days after class, writing on the board the mistake I made and the lesson I learned...Ha!!!



Enjoy "Bee's Bean" during one of his after school moments...Thanks!
ginetteginette
   ginetteginette on Dec 19 '07
this just falls flat for me. you've given this kid a pencil to write on the black board, which isn't even black. you should go all the way and turn this into a blackboard, the pencil into chalk and do the handwriting yourself. it's just not visually appealing.
bbarchi
bbarchi on Dec 19 '07
Thank you, and you're on point with your criticism...definitely better than just saying, "I don't like it..." Thanks Ginetteginette...
DarknessRising
DarknessRising on Dec 19 '07
I like that the blackboard isn't black and that he's writing in pencil...the phrase itself is out there, and the kid is formless. Even with these seeming inconsistencies, the handwriting is graceful, established and aesthetically pleasing. The conflict of these images appeal to me.
bbarchi
bbarchi on Dec 19 '07
Whoa! That is another way of looking at it...Thanks Darkness!!!
DarknessRising
DarknessRising on Dec 19 '07
Anytime Lord Belisario! :P I like the grey one the best.
Desur is Danny Doom
Desur is Danny Doom on Dec 19 '07
Very nice idea... I would think of buying it, but with another type use for the writings on the board.. : / Nevermind, great work ; )
mapmaker
mapmaker on Dec 19 '07
17 years of Simpsons episodes have made this image a bit passé
Ben TM
Ben TM on Dec 19 '07
I agree with mapmaker
evilious
evilious on Dec 19 '07
yep it needs to be handwriting
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