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Dec 18 '07
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2.09 from 1,606 votes
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FRICKINAWESOME on Dec 18 '07 Good idea, but wouldn't this be a better idea if a burglar was holding up a pedestrian, and the cop was either climbing up on a thread to save them or hanging on the the outside of the pocket, about to jump in and save the civilian? also, I think the people pointing upwards on the left part of the shirt should be pointing to the right instead of straight up to nothing. and maybe a dog on a leash and some children? But i like the idea so much this still gets a 3 from me. Good work!
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thanks for the feedback! you're the best!
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I like it! Definitely go with the suggestions already listed. I especially like the cop-climbing-to-the-rescue idea.
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ginetteginette on Dec 18 '07 yes, frickinawesome's pointers are really great, hope you go through with them, but also please make sure all the pedestrians are pointing to the pocket, you've just made them all point upwards when the people on the right (shirt's left) should be pointing up diagonally.
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What a great concept! Though I'd definitely change the pointers as was previously mentioned.
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cool idea. 4
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thanks for your invaluuble comments, I really appreciate that!
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very nice 4 for now but if the above comments are done this'd truly deserve a print...
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haha sweet 4
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paulburgess on Dec 21 '07 good job, joemonster, i really like it! it think frickin has some good feedback too.
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jujuj
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and you could improve the pocket, this is a little too simple i think.
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SOOO WEIRD!!!!!!!!!!
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I like it! Maybe the people could be closer to the hem? It seems like they're just sort of floating in space. And some more variation to the type of people (kids, pets, etc, maybe a stroller?) would also rock. $4
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i agree to frickenawsomes comment, especially the cop idea. very sweet otherwise
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thanks for all your comments! it's been a great learning experience for me. :-)
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4 days later
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imo it'd look pretty awesome without the people
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