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i love the idea and drawing, but maybe not in the comic strip style? use the shape of the shirt better so it's easier to see and it will be a lot better.
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i love it as is. but if too many ppl dont understand it b/c of the format, then you might have to change it...
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I like it! Made me giggle. I'm a film person, so kind of like the strip form, but it might be a bit cleaner with just the rectangles.
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Very funny! perhaps if you made it more like a landscape that showed the trail of destruction it would be more clear but it is very cute
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