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oh maybe i'm just a bit daft, but it might be your linework. because it's in a scribbly style it might be harder to read for some. i really love the concept though
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nice, I like the motion of everything, though I wish the face was a little clearer at the very beginning... wait, is that a face?
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its like a yawn turned into a cup of coffee right? I like the illustration style =)
not crazy about yellow and orange shirts though =/ |