i really like most of this, but there are some bits that are problematic. the telephone is drawn in the flashiest colour possible. the green would also demand the same attention but the details you added onto it push it back some. i think the telephone needs some of the same treatment or needs the colour to come down a tad.
i really like the way you've drawn the scroll but i feel it's awkwardly placed. it would have to be more of a trial and error thing to move it about though.
last thing i noticed was that the telephone cord looks a lot more like a skipping rope than a twirled up cord.
as much as i've picked at this i really love it. (i've only picked because i think this is a really great design and i would like to see it perfected)
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JoeMonster
fab!
ginetteginette
i really like most of this, but there are some bits that are problematic. the telephone is drawn in the flashiest colour possible. the green would also demand the same attention but the details you added onto it push it back some. i think the telephone needs some of the same treatment or needs the colour to come down a tad.
i really like the way you've drawn the scroll but i feel it's awkwardly placed. it would have to be more of a trial and error thing to move it about though.
last thing i noticed was that the telephone cord looks a lot more like a skipping rope than a twirled up cord.
as much as i've picked at this i really love it. (i've only picked because i think this is a really great design and i would like to see it perfected)
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chelly
really pretty!
wotto
awesome use of colour
squintygirl
I love the colours and the patterns on the oven mitts. Yay!
Todow
I think when this was a critique I didn't like it... I have no idea why. You win. $5 the colors and patterns are lovely.
ehrady
you are gonna have an awesome design one of these days, this is probably one of your more solid efforts. good job.
renfrue
someday i'm gonna tell my grandkids I knew the artist who invented "durp"
FRICKINAWESOME
I like how you now have models on your subs that speak for me! lol.
shakethesheets
Absolutely amazing... I want to wear it every day on every color
lunchboxbrain
yes!
shirtflirt
this is performing an autopsy on ren and/or stimpy's brain.
perfect.
corey9
thanks peoples.
here was the crit for this thing.
LlamasDesignMyHeart
$5
lunchboxbrain
i take it your back corey?
WhitneyBeth
love, love, LOVE. $5.
Stars.
I dont get it. but I love it!
Ellsswhere
mmm tasty nutrition
ephoto28
i like it without the words, great design!
jean_warhol
5
shakethesheets
I don't want to live in a world where this gets a 1.76... It just doesn't make sense.
shakethesheets
:(
corey9
:)
thanks for rooting for it!
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