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Dec 15 '07
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A few of my characters together in simple white outline.
alexabexis
alexabexis on Dec 15 '07
I like the animals and their placement, not sure why the "wtf" is in there, though.
karlaaa
karlaaa on Dec 15 '07
the font is ugly
bensticle
bensticle on Dec 15 '07
The "wtf" replaces my design company name, "BUZZ", which was originally there.



As to karlaaa, thanks for your constructive criticism.
alexabexis
alexabexis on Dec 15 '07
I see. But I don't think you need the text there. It draws your eye down from the design, which is the focus. It just kind of prevents you from getting a good first look at the characters, which all look very good and are arranged well together.
Eowyn_twl
Eowyn_twl on Dec 15 '07
Cute.

I wouldn't wear it myself but it's very clean and well rendered.



Do you think you could have a look at mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/11403/Quadruple_Fisting_It
asfi235
asfi235 on Dec 15 '07
Seriously, lose the text.
bensticle
bensticle on Dec 15 '07
Haha ok the verdict is in, although this has already been submitted and isn't for critique.



If it doesn't get accepted I'll resubmit with changes. Something more like tis, maybe? http://www.redbubble.com/people/benj/clothing/419412-4-the-gang-of-five
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