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It's awesome, but the book looks weird, kind of flat. Maybe define the spine a little more? Also please print it on a black tee!
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dacat, try this
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I like the book and placement of the design, the words just need to seem leaking out a bit more, instead of just in a static pattern. Maybe twisting and running over other words? Still ,great stuff.
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$5
i used to tell customers at work they had to collect the words for their books at the customer service desk |
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Really like this, but wouldn't get on that colour shirt; perhaps on a grey or something less light/bright.
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About my design
for a hi-res, check here!
http://www.flickr.com/photo_zoom.gne?id=2098627046&size=l