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I really like the idea, but you should bolden the notes or something becuase i didn't realize they were supposed to be stripes until you mentioned it.
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very cool for the music geek, love it, but like some of the previous commentors i think you should make the staff bolder so the bumblebee part is more clear
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Argh, I despise this piece, pain in the butt to play. :-P
It's a nice concept, but I agree that it should be darker/bolder to get the desired effect. |
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I love this idea! It HAS to be BOLDER in order to make the joke. (I'm jumping on here cuz I want this to work!) Once this is fixed, it's a WINNER!
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This might have worked better if you'd kept the yellow shirt, and then had the music etc in shirt colour on black stripes.
Still, nice idea, good luck. |
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yeah darken the lines for sure, maybe make the notes bumble bees instead of notes, liven it up a little, ya know?
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I agree that it needs to be bold thicker lines and most certainly have some bees buzzing around the notes to make it clearer.
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Brilliant idea. Try putting the staves closer together, and as everyone has said make them bolder. The stripes will be smaller, but more distinct.
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It is designed to make you look like a big bumble bee. Black ink on yellow shirt, possibly suade or puff ink.
Actual sheet music for The Flight of the Bumble Bee by Nikolai Andreyevich Rimsky-Korsakov. Music is public domain, copyright does not apply.