Ready-made shirt
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Dec 11 '07
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i don't understand
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Duchamp used a lot of felt-tipped markers, then?
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That's a pretty good rendering of the urinal. It makes me feel like going to the bathroom. I'm not sure the pen is necessary for the design.
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ginetteginette on Dec 11 '07 not much concept in this.
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It's the ready-made shirt! If you don't understand, please read that Ready Made on wikipedia
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do you people really not know what this is?
I'm not sure it needs to be on a shirt, but seriously, go read up on Duchamp. his readymades are kind of pivotal in the history of art. |
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it needs to be on a shirt! :)
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againstbound on Dec 11 '07 me likelike
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*knows who Duchamp is and understand the "Ready Made" comment
*still won't wear a urinal on a shirt |
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yeah I think if maybe you were a huge Duchamp fan, this might be great. I wouldn't wear it, but there are those that might. As a critique, I'd lose the pen, just because it's sort of floating and awkward. The dripping is fine, but I'd so no to the pen.
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I remember thinking the same thing when this was in critique: I'm a fan of Duchamp, but I can't ever see myself wearing this.
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it looks like an athletic supporter to me. a "cup" if you will.
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I'd drop the pen too AND would try darker t-shirt colours.
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polynothing on Dec 11 '07 Hmm... perhaps if it just said "fountain" under it.
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polynothing on Dec 11 '07 oh, and you loose the marker.
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thank you for your comments! I understand you but.. I think the marker isn't really bad, it add hmm.. a special "fun" touch.. without, I think it miss something.
I would like a t-shirt color like the wall more than the shirt and.. it's made with illustrator, juste vectors. Thanks and remember.. be nice! |
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murraymullet on Dec 11 '07 I think that your light source and shadows aren't making sense. If you want to keep the marker, which i agree should go, lay it down to give the appearance of Duchamp signing it and walking away. Nice work on the urinal just a bit more attention to the shadows and lights source.
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FANTASTIC! I've always been a Duchamp fan, so this totally makes my year!
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There's not enough contrast between its inside and outside, which is why I didn't SEE what it was..
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fuck you duchamp
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shirt still gets a 5
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ginetteginette on Dec 12 '07 i know duchamp and that's the point. there is no concept to this shirt, all you've done is render one of his pieces. this is just copy-art
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bortwein on Dec 12 '07 Well done. We should team up and have this and my This Is Not Cake design printed together and sold as a pair.
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hehe, i luv modern art. (:
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It's a concept and it made reaction. "This is no cake" is great too :)
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what the .. Why it's droped?
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ok.
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bortwein on Dec 12 '07 aw, that's too bad. This wasn't drop worthy.
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