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why can't a knife be taking the photograph or the camera on a stand? the second spoon confuses things
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um i think you should take out the photographer and just have the family cuz its a little too much going on and the camera doesnt really look like a camera
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I think it would be better if it just showed the spoon / fork / spork, the cameraman is unnecessary as is the table and the salad and allthat.
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Again, I agree that you only need the three main characters.
It's just confusing to look at and a bit cluttered. Cute idea though! |