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Oct 31 '03
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I would be glad for some comments!!

thx

Logmaster
Logmaster on Oct 31 '03
The red seems to be a little visually distracting. I also think the text could either have more open kerning or several baseline shifts, as if to say that the person writing or saying this is trembling. Great concept, clean design.
trixie stalker
trixie stalker on Nov 01 '03
i think the font is to much standard even to the simplicity of the rest
dosid
dosid on Nov 02 '03
i dig the idea and the imagery. however, the text significantly takes away from the shirt as a whole. i agree with logmaster that the text could be jittery, or simply designed better.
papadoc
papadoc on Nov 03 '03
I think doing without the text altogether might be for the best... I think the image is strong enough and simple enough to tell the story by itself.



And now that I think about it, I should just keep this comment on a notepad on my desktop, so that I can copy and paste it when needed... I seem to end up thinking it quite a lot here... ;)
Targetface
Targetface on Nov 03 '03
Re-Animator!!!!!! YES! lose the text and its godly.



and if it wasn't a re-animator reference then i'd still buy it and say it was.
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