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713 days ago
Submitted on:
Dec 06 '07
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23 comments
Final average score:
1.95 out of 5
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Euphoric Peppermint
Euphoric Peppermint on Dec 06 '07
Woahh. Love this. :]
KrazieKorie
KrazieKorie on Dec 06 '07
consider embroidering, please
beeskneesindustries
beeskneesindustries on Dec 06 '07
Ooo... Embroidery would be perfect. Thanks for the idea!
Rajiara
Rajiara on Dec 06 '07
really cute! I don't know if it needs the clouds, or it seems like they should be higher? adorable illustration though.
Ruefulstar
Ruefulstar on Dec 06 '07
Tight!
I agree with rajiara the clouds should be
higher or not even there
but it should def include embroidery
still a $5 in my book
laurenkate8
laurenkate8 on Dec 07 '07
agreed about the clouds
beeskneesindustries
beeskneesindustries on Dec 07 '07
Thanks, folks! If I take out the clouds, should I still keep the water line?
Annealt
Annealt on Dec 08 '07
It's missing something, but it's still really cute.
ocean boy
ocean boy on Dec 08 '07
I love all the underwater and scuba diving ones
beeskneesindustries
beeskneesindustries on Dec 08 '07
Missing something, huh? Does the design look like it's too empty or is does the idea need something to drive it home? Or both?
machine413
machine413 on Dec 08 '07
cool... do you post on mojizu i think i remember something similar there
Wannaeataburger
Wannaeataburger on Dec 08 '07
Cute design. I agree, it would look better without the clouds.
BaronVonMonkey
   BaronVonMonkey on Dec 09 '07
I love this, and I was just looking at your character prints on flickr- could we have some of those on tees please?
beeskneesindustries
beeskneesindustries on Dec 09 '07
Thanks!

Machine413: I'd actually never heard of Mojizu, but I'll be posting there, now. Thanks for letting me know about it!

BaronVonMokey: (I like that name.) I feel like some of my characters aren't snazzy enough for Threadless, so I've been working on figuring out how to make them fill up a shirt better. There will be a lot more submissions to come from me, I hope. Which ones were you looking at specifically?
clause
   clause on Dec 10 '07
gd job! i realise u like blue alot hee hee. probably the whole design could go higher or lower together. the clouds look fine to me.
beeskneesindustries
beeskneesindustries on Dec 10 '07
Yeah, I always say that red is my favorite color, but when it comes time to color an illustration, it always winds up blue. Higher or lower, huh? That can be done. Any idea which way would work better?
Dabem
Dabem on Dec 11 '07
I'd just like to add the water line gets a bit lost, and it seems a little odd. Maybe if you tried making it a lighter color it would stand out more.
beeskneesindustries
beeskneesindustries on Dec 11 '07
Dabem, I think you're right, a lighter color would work much better. Thanks!
AdonisM
AdonisM on Dec 11 '07
Reminds me of Fluke by Christopher Moore.
http://www.chrismoore.com/fluke.html
dropsofrain
dropsofrain on Dec 11 '07
i really like the smile on the sub. i think the sub and the waterline could go lower and the clouds could go higher. i agree with annealt, there's something missing. perhaps something in the ocean for the girl to be watching? or is the point that there is no one else there? then perhaps making the sub smaller and really emphasizing the blank space. the design is adorable. :)
clause
   clause on Dec 12 '07
hi, i think the girl looking at something is a gd idea.. maybe the girl and the sub go up high? then she will be looking down at something really out of the world maybe a gigantic swimming cat? haha just an idea :)
krista5092
krista5092 on Dec 12 '07
haha that whale rules
Darcy8387
Darcy8387 on Dec 13 '07
love love love the idea, would like to see the illustration have a bit more definition and depth to it, at this point its too cartoon-y for my taste.
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azure8472
azure8472 on Feb 11 '08
why did this not score higher :(
beeskneesindustries
beeskneesindustries on Feb 11 '08
Who knows? As soon as I get around to it, I'll fix it up a bit and resub.
igo2cairo
   igo2cairo on Feb 12 '08
Missed this. Yeah, should have scored way higher! Threadless can be weird that way. Anyway, really cool, charming design.
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