The Day the Music Died
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1634 days ago
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Dec 06 '07
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needs more detail, like actual "police: do not cross" on the yellow tape and more defined road cones.
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shouldn't the police tape be around the chalk drawings? and maybe the cones around that?
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The tape is being held up by poles coming out of the cones.
I like how you went for the implied lines and subtle detail, but i don't think its working for this design. |
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It's too hard to see the poles coming out of the cones. At first glance it looks jacked up. It's a neat design and idea, but I guess the background or pole colors should be different.
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i love this idea. but i agree with the others- the execution is a bit lacking.
it could be set up in an actual setting like next to a fence where you could have caution tape streaming across to a tree or something and could still have it fade out to black like nothing else around it exists. just a thought so good luck if you make changes! |
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I agree with the previous comments, and I'd also suggest some distressing on the chalk lines.
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I agree with everyone else as well...I would DEFINITELY buy, but just change the pole colour and add maybe "crime scene" to the tape.
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I agree with everyone else too. It's a GREAT idea, it just needs to be refined a bit. I definitely like the idea of smudging the chalk lines a bit.
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FRICKINAWESOME on Dec 10 '07 Yup, great idea, change what has already been said to change and there you go! You could even have a little radio skulking away as radio has been killing creative and clever music for years now.
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maybe if you wrote 'caution' on the tape it would look better
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agree with everyone else. great idea, but the poles need to be a different color. i had to stare at this for a few seconds before it made sense (which might just be me, but).
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Same here
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FA's idea of the radio really is frickin awesome.
Do that! :D |
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